All of us need friends, and during our live make many friendships. Many have been debating that whether it is better to find smart friends or humorous friends. In my point of view, It is very benefecial to us to make friends with clever people who are mostly successful people.
The first and foremost reason is intelligent people can help us in many different situations. They know how to overcome different situations and solve various problems in their lives. A pertinent example can shed light on this assertion. One of my ex-classmate who lives in the United Kingdom now, made a very great impact on my life. When we were in the university we spent lots of time together. He always helped me in my difficult exams. Physics and mathematics were very complicated to me, but he teached me so well that I could get a top mark in that courses. with his helps I ranked as third student in the university. Now he is studying his Ph.D. and still helps me in my applications. as can be seen, friendship with a smart boy had lots of positive effects on my life.
Another reason that should be taken into account is that, we can make a great impact in us and, and after a while we will behave like them. Human is a social creature, gets a lot of impression from the environment in which he lives. If someone be surrounded with smart people, he will be like them, and conversely if they be in an environment that other people are not in a good level, this can have adverse effects. A reseaech was conducted on 1000 graduated students in our university which revealed that students get a huge impacts from their close friends. Results of this research showed that people who were successful and had a lower IQ had a high IQ friend during their university years. In nutshell, Intelligent people make a positive impression on us and can help us to be seccessful.
According to the reasons mentioned above, I think that it is better to find smart friends instead of people with good sense of humor. Mainky because they help us in different situations, on the other hand, we will get impression from them after a while and can be more successful in our live.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, conversely, first, if, so, still, third, well, while, i think, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 59.0 43.0788530466 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1762.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 388.0 407.700716846 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5412371134 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43821085614 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62557910551 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.502577319588 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 543.6 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.6305945012 48.9658058833 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.9047619048 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4761904762 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.04761904762 5.45110844103 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202605409309 0.236089414692 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0646824849355 0.076458572812 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0820069078884 0.0737576698707 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154570161188 0.150856017488 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0571102332271 0.0645574589148 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 11.7677419355 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 10.9000537634 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 68.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.5 Out of 30
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