Nowadays, many parents are struggling with their children over a diverse range of disagreements. Maybe because the hasten improvement of technology made a generation gap between parents and young people. There have been a mixed reactions to parents rules on children among psycologysts. I am afraid I can not agree with the idea that society expects young people a too strict rules to follow. Following lines further describes my view about this topic.
The first and foremost reason is that most of the youngsters do not obey the rules at all. Maybe this is a result of modernism and an impcat of advent of certain technologies such as social networks. My cousin is stil a high school student. One day I have seen him in the street and he was smoking, I said him it is inappropreate for a 17 years old boy to smoke, but he rudely said to me that this is not my business. My aunt always complains about his misbehaviors and calls him rebelious. She thinks that this bad behaves are the result of his friends in the internet and social network applications. I know many of young people who treat like him. As it can be seen, new generation do not obey any role, therefore strict rules is meaningless.
Another reason that should be taken into account is that these days parents are significantly influenced by youth. Young kids always ask many things and parents have no choice but to do it. That is because other parents are listening to their kids and if they do not that, it can have a bad impression on them. One compelling example from this kind of parents is my sister. She has a 10 year old son. He is very cute and I love him. Once he cam home from the school and asked my sister to buy him a cellphone. My sister was surprised by his request and said him you are not supposed to have a cellphone, because you are too young. My cousin replied that all of his friends have a cellphone and he is the only one who still did not have one. This convinced my sister to buy a cellphone for him so that he does not feel ashamed when he is in school. Obviously, even though my sister had a rule for his son, undrstood that had to break her rule and bought him a cellphone because she was under pressure of other parents.
All in all, I do not agree with the idea that young people are expected to obey strict rules. Mainly because they do not obey any rules and still nothing happends. More over parents can not expect
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...him in the street and he was smoking, I said him it is inappropreate for a 17 years ...
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...sister was surprised by his request and said him you are not supposed to have a cell...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, so, still, therefore, kind of, such as, i am afraid
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 73.0 43.0788530466 169% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1977.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 449.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.40311804009 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60321845022 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47544275359 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.487750556793 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 614.7 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.6023004067 48.9658058833 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.2222222222 100.406767564 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6296296296 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 5.45110844103 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.85842293907 259% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181131466539 0.236089414692 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0551255311118 0.076458572812 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103504020207 0.0737576698707 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152596931261 0.150856017488 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0954965840718 0.0645574589148 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 11.7677419355 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.94 10.9000537634 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.89 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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