Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
The world we live in has changed dramatically during the last half-century. The way we live is also an entirely different thing than it was decades ago. So from a personal view, it is easier to live today than people did it before. There are several reasons as discussed in the following essay.
First of all, technology advance makes life more convenient. Inventions that people could not imagine in the past does change individuals' lifestyle, saving us time and money. For instance, e-commerce, the most common way people buy things in my country today, has enabled people to get any stuff they need without the restriction of time and space. Since I was born and raised in the countryside, when I was a child I hardly got access to the latest gadget stuff in my town. But now, Amazon has removed the barrier of shopping with terrific logistic and delivery system, cutting down the goods price by replacing manpower with automation. As a result, people can enjoy online shopping at a more affordable price whenever they want to. For this reason, technology has contributed to a better life experience today.
Furthermore, the improvement of Medicare systems has made sure that people live longer. A large number of state-owned hospitals has been set up, which means people living in rural areas can get the therapy they need quickly. A compelling example for this is the average lifespan which was 60 in China 40 years ago, whereas now the number has significantly ascended to 77 according to statistics. Individuals are less likely to be killed by regular diseases like flu or malaria. Besides, the government has poured billions of money into food safety to protect citizens from illness. All these indicate that people now are living a lengthier and healthier life than our grandparents live.
Lastly, amusement activities today are way more diverse than the past. No matter youngsters and the middle-age can easily find their place for recreation, which was impossible decades before. Take my family as an example, my grandparents were living in poverty in the time of Culture Revolution, and they had never had a trip to the North to see snow until last year we brought them to Harbin watching the Ice Festival. Now I have road trips with my parents each year. It is not an exaggeration to say the steady increase of income makes it possible for people to have utterly different entertainment.
In conclusion, citizens are indeed living more easily compared with those rough time. Elaborated technology, increasingly developed medicare system and various pastimes all the factors to a better life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Many; Numerous
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Suggestion:
... Harbin watching the Ice Festival. Now I have road trips with my parents each yea...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, furthermore, if, lastly, so, whereas, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2181.0 1977.66487455 110% => OK
No of words: 436.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00229357798 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56953094068 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73378620775 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 263.0 212.727598566 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603211009174 0.524837075471 115% => OK
syllable_count: 698.4 618.680645161 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.9800713302 48.9658058833 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.875 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1666666667 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.95833333333 5.45110844103 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142321574952 0.236089414692 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0420684491432 0.076458572812 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0367747466317 0.0737576698707 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0804232563599 0.150856017488 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.024277430714 0.0645574589148 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 86.8835125448 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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