In recent times, there has been a galactic change to the way of life of people as well as the structure and implementation of events or things generally. From a personal view, life today is much more easier and convenient than it was years ago. My reasons are stated below.
Firstly, technology is the most important tool that has helped to restructure the 21st century. This tool has improved the communication sector by reducing stress and saving time which means that information can be related to another person without having direct contact. Unlike before, a message takes longer period to approach its destination. Instant dissemination of information is now at our finger tips via phone calls to any destination, sending messages to any part of the world, using social media platforms like Facebook, Messenger, Whatsapp, and Instagram. This medium has help to cut down long processes that was used during my grandparents' childhood days.
In the medical line, new innovations have been set up to improve the health conditions of people whereas, formerly, people die of common ailments like flu or malaria. Over the years, researches have been carried out which have resulted in the discovery of more effective drugs and techniques to curb the most menacing ailments to reduce the mortality rate. For example, in Nigeria, the NATIONAL DRUG LAW ENFORCEMENT AGENCY has been established to foresee the kind of drugs that are to be consumed by people. Also, public awareness was made effective to educate people to speak out whenever it is deemed fit. The impact of this has been magnificent because it actually worked, making life more enjoyable.
In conclusion, I believe that people of this century are fortunate to witness these new astonishing innovation and creations that have made life more comfortable for living.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, first, firstly, if, so, well, whereas, for example, in conclusion, kind of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 43.0788530466 44% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1535.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 298.0 407.700716846 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15100671141 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76807400247 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.644295302013 0.524837075471 123% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.6947970382 48.9658058833 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.642857143 100.406767564 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2857142857 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.28571428571 5.45110844103 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0959123051948 0.236089414692 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0359038106695 0.076458572812 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0498748357264 0.0737576698707 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0702398152224 0.150856017488 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0518503592725 0.0645574589148 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 11.7677419355 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 10.9000537634 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.71 8.01818996416 121% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 86.8835125448 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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