Thorough history of mankind's life has been changed day by day due to a lot of factors. Sometimes these reasons have improved the quality of lifestyle and in contrast in some other cases a lot of problems have happened. A group of people is inclined toward the opinion that Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children but as always there are people who are against an idea. From my own perspective, I highly support the first idea and in the following paragraphs, I will delve into the most significant reasons.
The most important reason is that science and technology improvement. Every day hundreds of new devices invented all around the world which help people to do their daily tasks as much as easier than long time ago. For example by the invention of Internet and mobiles, we can do a lot of our works without traveling to new places.
Another reason which deserves some words here is that the population of the Earth has been increased. The more people live in a society the less they have to effort to do hard works individually. When there are a lot of members in a society they can divide doing arduous tasks between themselves, so as a result, they feel less stress in life and the quality of life can be improved. Research has been done 3 years ago and its results indicated that during the 21th Century people are more fortunate to the future because of their good life quality.
Although the aforementioned reasons are first which may one find out at first glance, there is still one important reason. Hygiene plays an indiscriminate role in people's life. If we look at the history, many years ago a lot of people died because of diseases which now are considered were simple like chickenpox. the main reason was that at that time there was not any medicine and people less knew about healthiness and diseases.
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To make a long story short, if one looks at all mentioned reasons, he will find out that the quality of human life improved incredibly from the past till now. If one weighs the merits and demerits of the above statement, one soon realizes that these main factors play an important role in life, but still maybe there are some reasons which have not been mentioned in this text.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: The
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Suggestion: new
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, may, so, still, for example, in contrast, in fact, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1867.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 400.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6675 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.472135955 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49053656284 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 594.9 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.6463453248 48.9658058833 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.823529412 100.406767564 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5294117647 20.6045352989 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.94117647059 5.45110844103 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196846819064 0.236089414692 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0579232406393 0.076458572812 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0862960281428 0.0737576698707 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103809741366 0.150856017488 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0712137666849 0.0645574589148 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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