Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Modern technology is creating a single world culture. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
Technology connects people all over the world. Technolgy has a strong influence on culture. Because of technolgoy people all around the world connects to each other, understand each others culture and sometiome adopts each other culture. While technolgy is connecting people and make them more aware about each others culture it is not creating a single culture.
First, Modern Technology helps spreading information, any information be it culture or anything. People around the world For example, Indian men traditionally wear dhoti kurta and women sari but influenced by western culture indian people adopted western clothing. But it is not that they have given up on wearing dhotis and saris. Many people in India still wear them and some people wear them on occasions. They have adopted western clothing as its provides ease of movement. It is more like adopting things that are better in other culture rather than following a single culture.
Furthermore, if we look today, art, cinema and music major part of culture, one counttry cinema and music is influnced by other countries cinema and music and vice versa. Many of the movies in Inddia is remake of USA movies and some European movie. For example, when Harry met Sajal is remake of a US movie. But certain movies in USA are influenced from Indian movies. So it is more of adopting movies that are better or adopting part of culture that are better rather than adopting whole culture.
Moreover, Modern technology just make people more aware about different cultures like due to live telecast and movies, even people in rural parts of India knows about Amercan festival likes Christmas and halloween and people in USA knows about Holi and Diwali. There are many people who celebrates all the festivals or celebrates festival that they like, it is like technology is giving people more ideas, more beliefs from which people can take knowledge and choose from. It helps them undrstand better about each other culture. Technolgy is not creating a single world culture,it just creates awareness. It is people belief and interest, for example some Indian living in USA celebrares DIwali and some celebrates xmas.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 32, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to spread' or 'spread'.
Suggestion: to spread; spread
...lture. First, Modern Technology helps spreading information, any information be it cult...
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Line 5, column 129, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'countries'' or 'country's'?
Suggestion: countries'; country's
... cinema and music is influnced by other countries cinema and music and vice versa. Many o...
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Line 7, column 579, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
...y is not creating a single world culture,it just creates awareness. It is people be...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, look, moreover, so, still, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 13.8261648746 166% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1818.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 357.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09243697479 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4313467321 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.481792717087 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 591.3 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 57.0737242521 48.9658058833 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.9 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.85 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.7 5.45110844103 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.109287971301 0.236089414692 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0446142784266 0.076458572812 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0527436405704 0.0737576698707 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0713626963514 0.150856017488 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0310335891331 0.0645574589148 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 86.8835125448 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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