Family members learn a lot from each other. Therefore, people often discuss whether parents learn more from their children or children learn more from their parents. I do not know why they have this debate. Of course because children learn more from their parents. I will tell you three reasons to support my opinion.
First, children learn to speak from their parents. Speaking is a very important skill in our lives. We learn such important but basic skills from our parents. We learn not only words but also words that we can write from our parents. If we do not learn to speak when we are young, we probably would not be able to live. In fact, experts say that speaking is the second most important area after physiological phenomena. Like this, we learn this important part from our parents, so children learn more from their parents.
Second, children learn from their parents’ personalities and behaviors. People’s personalities change and their values appear differently depending on the environment in which they grew up. Among them, parents are the most influential people. Children learn a personality that can be seen as a whole through their parents. For example, children who are always growing up in a fighting family become violent.
Third, children learn manners from their parents. Manners are really important, because they affect relationships, personality and social life in general. A child’s life can be ruined if they learn manners incorrectly when they are young. This etiquette is usually learned by many children from their parents. Parents let their children know to correct any misbehavior or wrongdoing. I saw in the news that game-addicted parents did not take care of their child, so the child was always alone, difficult to make friends and later even talking to people.
This is why I think children learn more from their parents. No matter how advanced the times have become and children teach their parents new devices or terms, it is hard to keep up with the amount that parents teach their children.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 166, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...heir parents new devices or terms, it is hard to keep up with the amount that par...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, really, second, so, therefore, third, for example, i think, in fact, in general, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1720.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 340.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05882352941 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54373509535 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511764705882 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.7998620687 48.9658058833 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.8 100.406767564 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.6 20.6045352989 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.48 5.45110844103 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.88709677419 266% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.498121571687 0.236089414692 211% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.177436181358 0.076458572812 232% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.145725690209 0.0737576698707 198% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.334438654774 0.150856017488 222% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10041927667 0.0645574589148 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 11.7677419355 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 58.1214874552 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.1575268817 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 10.002688172 40% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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