Many people have a lot of worries when they become college students. Among them, the biggest concern would be home. Some people say that it is important to live independently now that you are a college student, and others say that it is safe to live with your family. I agree with the latter. I will tell you three reasons to support my opinion.
To begin with, you do not feel lonely living with your parents. These days, many college students stay at home more because of Covid-19. Therefore, they feel lonely more. Especially, when they adapt to the new environment of university, they get a lot of stress from relationships and grades. In high school, they can relieve their stress by talking to their parents, but if they live alone as a college student, they have to solve it alone or endure it. In fact, college students are suffering from depression these days. For example, my friend’s older sister is a college student and living alone, she has become very timid and shy because she has no one to talk to.
Next, if we live with our parents, we can eat delicious and healthy meals. The biggest disadvantage of living alone is that you have to cook and eat alone. Most of them are too lazy to cook or have a lot of ingredients left, so they order delivery or cook ramen. If this happens, their health keeps getting worse and they miss home-cooked meals. On the other hand, if you live with your parents, you can eat warm home-cooked meals, stay healthy and live without worrying about food. For instance, my cousin said that she has lived alone since she was a college student. She ordered a lot of delivery, so her money went away quickly and her health got worse, so she moved back to her parent’s house.
Last, living with our parents makes us feel secure. It is too dangerous these days. There are more crimes than before and there are more strange people in the university. Therefore, if you have parents at home, it is safer than living alone. You can feel not only physical stability but also psychological stability. Sad or depressed in society there has been very low self esteem because if my parents came home and talked to restore self-esteem and can feel comfortable.
To sum up, if college students live with their parents, they can live a healthy and stable life without feeling lonely. That is why it is better to be with our parents.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in fact, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 65.0 43.0788530466 151% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1956.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 424.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61320754717 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53775939005 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38022064906 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 617.4 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 20.0 9.59856630824 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.7149652354 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.4444444444 100.406767564 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7037037037 20.6045352989 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.03703703704 5.45110844103 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 3.85842293907 363% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169795551924 0.236089414692 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.053496296273 0.076458572812 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0465225966434 0.0737576698707 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110081741437 0.150856017488 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0203757369816 0.0645574589148 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 11.7677419355 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.16 10.9000537634 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.99 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 10.002688172 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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