Money cant buy happiness. This statement is true in some cases and not true in most cased when we consider life as we experience it today. Money is very essential part of human life given that world bends to the power of money.
For most of us, to provide basic needs and necessities to our family, we need to earn money. Money should not be the only goal for us as we should have family priorities. But without money, we cant buy flowers for our loved ones. We wont be able to buy a vacation for our parents who have struggled for us and our happiness, their entire lives. If we want our kids to get the best of education available in the world, we need money.
For those who claim that Money is not everything in life, I agree to this only to some extent. If a person runs behind money, he will lose little things which make up our life. But, if we have no money, then the person will only think about his next meal and all his happiness will be ruined.
Money is very essential for happiness. One can buy chocolates, diamond rings, visit the best places on earth. As materialistic as one may sound, unless the person has given up all pleasures of life and has turned into a saint, Money is part and parcel of day to day life and essential for happiness.
To conclude, I would like to say, it is better to cry inside a Mercedez Benz and feel comfortable rather than crying in rain.
- If you could invent something new what product would you develop 87
- TOPIC # 54 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? One should never judge a person by external appearances. 60
- 131) Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Only people who earn a lot of money are successful. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 70
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Money can t buy happiness Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 64
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 7, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
Money cant buy happiness. This statement is true i...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...amily priorities. But without money, we cant buy flowers for our loved ones. We wont...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, then, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 52.1666666667 61% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1133.0 1977.66487455 57% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 263.0 407.700716846 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.30798479087 4.8611393121 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.48103885553 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25464063994 2.67179642975 84% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 212.727598566 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.54752851711 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 356.4 618.680645161 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.7111831336 48.9658058833 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.5333333333 100.406767564 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5333333333 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.46666666667 5.45110844103 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144720191258 0.236089414692 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0679061650659 0.076458572812 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0517473548989 0.0737576698707 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0773596592238 0.150856017488 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0433133916006 0.0645574589148 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 11.7677419355 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.42 10.9000537634 68% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.82 8.01818996416 85% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 86.8835125448 45% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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