Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Most advertisements make products seem much better then they really are.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Various companies spend thousands of dollars each year to promote their products and convince us to buy them. We can see advertisement slogans that a product is the best among other analogs. Most of people probably are aware of the situation that a product shown on TV and that one they actually buy might be completely different things.
Advertisements on the Internet make us believe that goods are better than those one we may see in real shops. Usually we can see that some things may cost cheaper on a website, though the sellers guarantee that the quality is still on a high level. People cannot check whether it is the truth or not. Having bought goods on the Internet, there is always the risk that they were put in a better light that they really are.
Continue the topic of online shopping; sometimes even feedbacks are not helpful at all. Online shops may pay money to people for writing positive comments about their products. Thus, in most cases people recommend this or that good even when they did not use them. For example, there are a lot of fake feedbacks on websites selling electronics. Once I have used one of such websites to buy a cell phone for myself. I saw that the rating based on people’s opinion of the phone was high and I decided to purchase it. When I got this phone, I was so disappointed that the camera and battery was really bad.
Moreover, nowadays it is very popular to pay celebrities for their participation in an adv campaign. They do this, because experts in marketing are sure that most of people will believe this type of an advertisement. Again a star may have no idea about the quality of a product he advertise, but most of people, especially fans of this celebrity, will trust him and buy a product.
Thus, since advertisement is a way to present a product, sellers and companies will do their best to promote it the best way. They may use various approaches for this such as using false feedbacks on websites or having famous people as promoters in advertisements.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 192, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'Most of', you should use 'the' ('Most of the people') or simply say ''Most people''.
Suggestion: Most of the people; Most people
...roduct is the best among other analogs. Most of people probably are aware of the situation tha...
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Line 7, column 159, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...ause experts in marketing are sure that most of people will believe this type of an advertisem...
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Line 7, column 192, Rule ID: KIND_OF_A[1]
Message: Don't include 'an' after a classification term. Use simply 'type of'.
Suggestion: type of
...e that most of people will believe this type of an advertisement. Again a star may have no...
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Line 7, column 282, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'advertises'.
Suggestion: advertises
... idea about the quality of a product he advertise, but most of people, especially fans of...
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Line 7, column 297, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
... quality of a product he advertise, but most of people, especially fans of this celebrity, wil...
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Line 7, column 382, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rity, will trust him and buy a product. Thus, since advertisement is a way to pr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, if, may, moreover, really, so, still, thus, for example, such as, in most cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1674.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 359.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66295264624 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63529771275 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537604456825 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 522.0 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.8576715017 48.9658058833 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 88.1052631579 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8947368421 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.94736842105 5.45110844103 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140501032402 0.236089414692 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0423050609409 0.076458572812 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0444035672472 0.0737576698707 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0844452232253 0.150856017488 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0347574472283 0.0645574589148 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 11.7677419355 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.