Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The most important factor that influence student’s success in school is a good teacher.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In today's society, education has become one of the most important factors in a person's life. It is widely believed that the most important factor that influences a student's success in school is a good teacher. However, I personally disagree with this statement.
In my opinion, while a good teacher plays an important role in a student's success, there are other factors that are equally important.Firstly, a student's attitude towards learning is crucial to their success in school. Even with the best teacher in the world, if a student is not motivated to learn, they will not succeed. For example, when I was in high school, I had a teacher who was very knowledgeable and passionate about his subject, but I was not interested in the subject at all. As a result, I did not do well in his class, even though he was a good teacher.
Secondly, a student's family background can also affect their success in school. If a student comes from a supportive family where education is valued, they are more likely to do well in school. On the other hand, if a student comes from a disadvantaged background where education is not a priority, they may struggle in school even with a good teacher.
Finally, a student's own effort and hard work are essential to their success in school. Even with a bad teacher, if a student is willing to put in the effort to learn, they can still do well. For example, I had a friend who had a teacher who was not very good, but he spent a lot of time studying on his own and ended up doing very well in the class.
In conclusion, while a good teacher is certainly important to a student's success in school, it is not the only factor. A student's attitude towards learning, family background, and their own effort and hard work are equally important. Therefore, I disagree with the statement that the most important factor that influences a student's success in school is a good teacher.
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement The most important factor that influence student s success in school is a good teacher Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 60
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement The most important factor that influence student s success in school is a good teacher Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 60
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
...most important factor that influences a students success in school is a good teacher. Ho...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
...od teacher plays an important role in a students success, there are other factors that a...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Firstly
...ther factors that are equally important.Firstly, a students attitude towards learning i...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
...s that are equally important.Firstly, a students attitude towards learning is crucial to...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a student' or simply 'students'?
Suggestion: a student; students
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
...in school, it is not the only factor. A students attitude towards learning, family backg...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
...most important factor that influences a students success in school is a good teacher.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, well, while, for example, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1579.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 340.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64411764706 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76735011222 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 212.727598566 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.420588235294 0.524837075471 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 480.6 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 3.51792114695 256% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.7892396729 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.6875 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.25 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.25 5.45110844103 206% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.386048465238 0.236089414692 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.169112525878 0.076458572812 221% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.135719913965 0.0737576698707 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.264372663068 0.150856017488 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103819989 0.0645574589148 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.19 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 86.8835125448 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.