Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The most important ways to improve the people’s health is to clean the environment.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays, there is a discussion between if the most important ways to improve the people’s health is to clean the environment. As for me, I disagree with that. There are two reasons to support my opinions. The first is we can also improve our health through exercising. Second, as an animal living in nature. Our body will make some changes to adapt out environment easier.
Exercise can provide lots of benefits to our body. We could improve our mind and brain’s ability through exercise. Like running, jumping and so on. We can improve our health through exercise. Exercise can also improve our ability for protecting form illness. I have a good example about my friends Mike. He is a man who is used to running for 1 hour every day. No matter what happened, he always runs. Now he is 60 years old. He keeps running for 20 years. His body now is as stronger as a young man. I can’t image that he is already 60. He hasn’t had any illness that is very dangerous. He is so healthy that he often joins some competitions like running and so on. It is obviously that exercise can improve our health.
It is very essential for the animals to make some simple changes to adapt the environment easier. This evolution will make our body healthier in face of terrible environment. There are many examples in this nature. Like the whales live in marine. It used to be the land creature. Because the temperature become so higher in the land and less food can be provided. This land creatures finally evolve to the marine creatures. Today’s whale. This kind of thing clearly show that if our environment changes, sometimes our body characters will surely change, too. It can also improve our health through this way.
Admittedly, I am not saying that it is no use to clean the environment. This can provide us clean air and better food for eating. But that’s just the temporary way. Compare to the way that our body will evolve to adapt the environment. It is good for our future to live with environment but not just clean the environment.
Our health is very essential. But it is not the important way to improve the people’s health is to clean the environment. We can improve our health not only by cleaning the environment but also by exercise and our own evolution.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 43, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...mittedly, I am not saying that it is no use to clean the environment. This can prov...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, second, so, as for, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 59.0 43.0788530466 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1881.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 404.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65594059406 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48327461151 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6021374393 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.457920792079 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 591.3 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 24.0 9.59856630824 250% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 38.0 20.6003584229 184% => OK
Sentence length: 10.0 20.1344086022 50% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.1473848228 48.9658058833 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 49.5 100.406767564 49% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 10.6315789474 20.6045352989 52% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.52631578947 5.45110844103 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 21.0 11.8709677419 177% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.88709677419 266% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193837724803 0.236089414692 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0554453134806 0.076458572812 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0749681349076 0.0737576698707 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153909038763 0.150856017488 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0866541221451 0.0645574589148 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.8 11.7677419355 49% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.79 58.1214874552 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.1575268817 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.56 10.9000537634 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.59 8.01818996416 82% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 10.002688172 40% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.0 10.0537634409 60% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 6.0 10.247311828 59% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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