Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Most people can solve important problems in their lives by themselves or with the help of their families. Help from the government is unnecessary.
People have different problems in their different parts of their lives, and the government has an important role to avoid and solve them. Some people believe that people’s problems should be solved by people themselves, but I disagree. I think governments should help people. People pay taxes to have a better life than before, therefore governments should create jobs and protect poor people.
Firstly, most people’s problems are financial. If they could find a job with a good salary, they can live better, and it depends on the governments. Governments should provide basic solutions that are needed to produce jobs. For instance, people who are in the same generation as my father had not different problems in finding a job that we have today because those days the government had provided enough basic facilities to create jobs, but today the government is not supportive as before. Therefore, nowadays people could not easily find jobs and have incomes to solve their problems. This experience shows the government should support and help people.
Secondly, in a society, we have different people, some of them are rich, but some are poor. In most cases, poor people have not enough money to solve their problems. In this situation, it is the government’s duty to help and support them. For example, two years ago we had a neighbor, their child was sick, but they had not enough money to take her to a hospital because she needed expensive surgery, but for several years the family has paid tax. Therefore, the government should had helped them, but they didn’t. Unfortunately, the family lost the kid. If the government had helped them, this would not happened. It shows how it is important that way government should help people.
Finally, I strongly believe that governments should help people to solve their problems because they pay tax. Therefore, it is the government’s duty to create jobs, and support poor people of society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, for instance, i think, in most cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 52.1666666667 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1647.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 323.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09907120743 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66248469957 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 212.727598566 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.455108359133 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 486.0 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 9.0 1.86738351254 482% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 54.0688450034 48.9658058833 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.35 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.15 20.6045352989 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 5.45110844103 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298122868173 0.236089414692 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111584223009 0.076458572812 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0616294835982 0.0737576698707 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215421068588 0.150856017488 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0176696560399 0.0645574589148 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.17 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 86.8835125448 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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