Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In my country, young people have a better life today than their parents enjoyed when they were young. Use reasons and examples to support your answer.
In this era, the life of young people is not as amazing as their parents were. New generation may have a lot of scientific technology but their souls are hollow. The life of the youth is easy as compared to our parents but they do not have any charm in it. Old generation people heart was so pure. I feel this way for the folllowing reasons which i will explore in the essay.
First, the old generation people like our parents did not have any facilities such as computers, mobile phone and cars but they have a peace of mind. If, there had any problems they share with the friends and family because they have real friends. Although they had a lot of home chores to do as there were no machines but they do it on sharing delightfully and never complains. For instance, i realize this when few months back my mother had a get together with her childhood friends and i was in shock by seeing them because i do not have any such friend even i have a friendlist of two hundred people on facebook. In additon, I always had a fight with my siblings on works of home like cleaning dishes. However, i just had to put in dish washer. As a result, my mother still do all works without saying any single word than I feel so ashamed and try to be like my mom.
Secondly, people of nineteen century were really a hard workers and they do all the arduous works by themselves, their work keeps them healthy. As they did not have car to travel they use bicycle or cover long distance on feets.They never suffer from basic health conditions like blood pressure, diabeties and heart attack these problems were rare. The science is involving in our life the rate of living is decrease. In addition, every ten out of hundred person suffers from these medical problem. To exemplify, my grand father is 90 years old he is physically more active than us and he do not have any terrible medical condition except the problem that develop naturally with age. On the contrary, children of modern world have no hard work because machines do all the things more perfectly but these teenagers have many health issues. For example, my nephew is was fifteen years old recently died from a sudden heart attach. When we reach hospital doctor asked that kid had any physically activity or not. Then my aunt realized he just used computer and played video game which cause his blood not to circulate properly and his blood pressure shoots.
In conclusion, our parents spent their life extremely peaceful while having all those hard ships. They share all their sorrows and happiness with others which keeps them delightful. I think this generation have must learn something from their parents and grand parents.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, really, second, secondly, so, still, then, while, for example, for instance, i feel, i think, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 62.0 43.0788530466 144% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2201.0 1977.66487455 111% => OK
No of words: 480.0 407.700716846 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58541666667 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68069463864 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35129895395 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 250.0 212.727598566 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520833333333 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 679.5 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.2622861445 48.9658058833 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.7083333333 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.875 5.45110844103 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.5376344086 253% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276858844736 0.236089414692 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0800628135358 0.076458572812 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0577938825066 0.0737576698707 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182565526651 0.150856017488 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0316616151202 0.0645574589148 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 11.7677419355 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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