Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Nowadays it is easier to maintain good health than in the past.
Life, the most important word all around the world. Every action we do leads to life to make it better. Are you doing the best for your life? What do you do for lunch when you are at work? Do you have a healthy diet? Do you do any special exercises? What about stress? Do you avoid it? Although most of the debates are about better lifestyles and the possibility of maintaining good health than in the past. I personally have a different idea about that. The following paragraphs will elucidate my viewpoint with three eminent preseasons.
First of all, I want to ask, whether people cook food daily even when they are at work? I mean are we individuals who spend lots of time preparing food for tomorrow lunch? It is axiomatic that life is busier than before. We spend 8 hours or so at work. We became people who are in a rush. Almost in this busy life, it is impossible for the majority of us to cook food. what should we do? What is your choice? Yes. We usually choose Semi-prepared food or fast food. Both of them are not so healthy as we thought they would be.
Though to substantiate wrong or right ideas, myriad of factors should be taken into consideration, I present another reason which makes us closer to the aforementioned opinion. Indeed, we live in a confliction. It means that while we are in a rush, we live in a sedentary lifestyle. We spend more time watching T.V or sleeping rather than in the past. In fact, Instead of doing exercise we prefer to sleep more. Although we are faced with a lot of works, we build a stable life for ourselves with a determine schedule and we never try to challenge it with something like exercise. What happens to our body with this sedentary lifestyle without any healthy work for our body? Of course, after some years we have to take care of it because of disease!
Last but not least, is stress. Whether our body will be healthy with daily stress full life? There are many books which put a lot of affords to convince people that stress can collapse the nervous system and be the reason for most of the disease. In fact, nowadays evolve in psychological fields inform people about irreparable injuries of stress and people are more conservative about it. They try to decline the rate of stress they would confront daily by neglect the negligible ones. But stress is still alive vibrantly among them.
To sum up, it is better to say although these days life seems easier than past, the influence of new lifestyle harm peoples` health in somehow. Indeed we confront with a lot of conflictions. In one hand we live in a harsh life, on the other hand, we have a sedentary lifestyle which is compiled with stress. If we do not choose another lifestyle as soon as possible we have to face the harmful consequence of it. We should do a special exercise and avoid any kind of stress as far as we can and also try to eat fresh food rather than fast foods or semi-prepared food.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: What
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Suggestion: V
...ifestyle. We spend more time watching T.V or sleeping rather than in the past. In...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'days'' or 'day's'?
Suggestion: days'; day's
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Suggestion: Indeed,
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Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ifestyle which is compiled with stress. If we do not choose another lifestyle as s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, still, while, i mean, in fact, kind of, of course, first of all, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 65.0 43.0788530466 151% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 78.0 52.1666666667 150% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2408.0 1977.66487455 122% => OK
No of words: 535.0 407.700716846 131% => OK
Chars per words: 4.50093457944 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.80937282943 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51761615936 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 262.0 212.727598566 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.489719626168 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 759.6 618.680645161 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 39.0 20.6003584229 189% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.7354264833 48.9658058833 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 61.7435897436 100.406767564 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.7179487179 20.6045352989 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.05128205128 5.45110844103 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.85842293907 311% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 16.0 4.88709677419 327% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177918655495 0.236089414692 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0509490801019 0.076458572812 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0650026533849 0.0737576698707 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108026784988 0.150856017488 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101925673655 0.0645574589148 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.6 11.7677419355 56% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 58.1214874552 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.1575268817 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.23 10.9000537634 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.79 8.01818996416 85% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 3.5 10.002688172 35% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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