Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: nowadays people are more willing to rely on themselves and family help and less willing to rely on the government when they meet problems.
With the efforts of the government, the whole society is getting better day by day. As far as I am concerned, recently, people are more likely turn to the government for help when they are in trouble rather than resolve the problems by themselves or their family members.
First, in terms of environment problems, people depend more on the government than themselves and family. As we know, the environment is becoming worse than before. For example, there are more and more air pollution in the atmosphere, which is very bad for people’s health. In the past, people could do a few things such as riding bikes to reduce the air pollution. Although people had tried their best, it was not effective. However, the government set up a new law to prohibit factories to produce carbon dioxide, sulfur dioxide and so forth. Besides, the government also set up natural reserves to protect the environment. Clearly, these things only can be done by the government and it is much helpful. Thus, people prefer to rely on the government to solve the problems.
Second, speaking of public transportation, the government is more reliable than people themselves and their family help. Previously, if people wanted to go to out, they just could walk or ride bikes. It was labor-consuming and time-consuming for them to go to a place that is far away from their home. Now, there are various kinds of public transportation such as subway, train and air plane for people to choose because the government’s development. It is much easier for people to go to any places than before. In this way, people don need to worry about how to go to distant places. Therefore, people are more willing to depend on the government than themselves and family members for help.
Last, health is another factor that people prefer to depend on the government. Obviously, health is one of the most important things for everyone because people can do nothing without a healthy body. In the past, people had no choice but to rely on their own or the caring from their family when they were sick. As time goes by, treatment becomes better than before due to the government’s fund. In this case, people are able to go to hospitals to cure their diseases which cannot be healed back then. Accordingly, asking the government for help when people confront with troubles is their first choices.
As the three reasons mentioned above, it is easy to draw the conclusion that when people meet problems they like to rely on the government instead of themselves and family members these days.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... people had tried their best, it was not effective. However, the government set u...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, besides, but, first, however, if, second, so, then, therefore, thus, for example, speaking of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 52.1666666667 125% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 8.0752688172 285% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2141.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 437.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89931350114 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57214883401 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77427656239 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.503432494279 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 647.1 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.1268222957 48.9658058833 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.64 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.48 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.84 5.45110844103 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30714058243 0.236089414692 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0905496591233 0.076458572812 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0847776547042 0.0737576698707 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192728397043 0.150856017488 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0227262858129 0.0645574589148 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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