Reading books and watching movies can open up one’s mind and horizon. People love to do what they are interested in to relax themselves after a busy day. Some people believe that what we read and watch would reflect who we are. In my perspective, I agree that people can get some clues about someone’s personalities by the books and movies he watches.
To begin with, people would search for the information that they care about. In the book store, business, politics, health, and travel are the most popular topics. Someone who bought a book about travel may indicate that he is planning for a trip; a person who bought a book that introduces healthy eating habits may be reflected that he wants to have a healthy life. If we meet a person for the first time, the books or movie introductions hold in his hand is a good topic to start a friendly talk.
In addition, the books and movies will illustrate the writer’s opinions and values. If someone agrees with the ideas in them, he would cite the ideas in his life. For instance, there are several books that indicated that the straw people used in daily life, would hurt mammals like turtles or whales in the ocean- mammals would consider straws as their food and cause death. The people who agree on this issue would probably use a paper straw instead of a plastic straw. As a result, if we see someone use a paper straw, we can imagine that he cares about environmental issues.
By contrast, not everyone would suitable for this statement. Actions are louder than words, we should observe people from what they do rather than what they read. Someone who likes to watch comedy does not mean that he is a funny person. We should take these as a reference, but not a fixed impression.
In sum, what the books and movies we love would represent part of us, it means that we believe in a certain faith. These books and movies provide a way that people could learn another person from them. However, we still have to get together with someone if we want to know more about him.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, so, still, for instance, in addition, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1688.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 367.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59945504087 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38456517191 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525885558583 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.9853410639 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.4 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.35 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.7 5.45110844103 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242733666251 0.236089414692 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0799599761149 0.076458572812 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0703763318379 0.0737576698707 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14507966049 0.150856017488 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0536308969034 0.0645574589148 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 11.7677419355 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.4 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.28 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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