The movie is the most popular kind of art nowadays. There are several types of genres with a lot of concepts and targets. Some of them are serious and trying to show us a specific point of view of reality and some of them are not. I think there is a lot of good and joyful films which might not teach you a real-life lesson but are worthy to watch anyway.
To begin with, watching an impressive movie in less serious genres such as action or comedy can be exciting and helpful. Professional critics might not agree with this assessment and say a real movie is just a deep and meaningful one, but all of us want to have some of us too. People want to spend their time with friends and family and avoid the stressful daily routines and enter the world of pleasureful imagination. So to earn these targets most of us decide to go to the nearest cinema, buy a ticket, and then just sit back relax and enjoy the time. These processes can help us to recover from mental pressures and after that, we will be ready to back to reality and solve our difficult problems at home or work and so on.
Furthermore, the main goal of cinema is to express the artist’s emotions and to show us real art. The 7th art which is both visual and hearing might be the most appropriate
To wrap it up, I extremely believe that watching a movie that does not necessarily educate you can be useful too, and it is not a waste of time at all, and there are different reasons for that. Not only can it be entertaining, but also it could have been powerful in other aspects of life instead of just teaching us about our daily lives.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 172, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nd hearing might be the most appropriate To wrap it up, I extremely believe that ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, but, furthermore, if, so, then, i think, kind of, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 13.8261648746 174% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1304.0 1977.66487455 66% => OK
No of words: 304.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.28947368421 4.8611393121 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32757170195 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5625 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 413.1 618.680645161 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.145241242 48.9658058833 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.666666667 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3333333333 20.6045352989 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.16666666667 5.45110844103 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273579956543 0.236089414692 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.090545487767 0.076458572812 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0605023378871 0.0737576698707 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151644451903 0.150856017488 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.06075034949 0.0645574589148 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.9 10.9000537634 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 86.8835125448 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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