Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?The opinions of celebrities, such as famous entertainers and athletes, are more important to younger people than they are to older people.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
No one can deny that there are both positive and negative aspects of the importance that young people give to celebrities' opinions. If I were forced to choose, I would definitely say that nowadays young generations are overly concerned if a celebrity they follow has an opinion on any matter. It is my firm belief that new generations are very much influenced by what the celebrities they follow, think for a number of reasons, and I will develop these ideas in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, we live in the era of social media. That is a great example of how young people follow so many artists or athletes because they see them as role models. I have to admit that my opinion on this matter has been profoundly influenced by my own personal experience. You see youngsters can feel identified if one of their favorite artists says something that they resonate with it too. As a result, celebrities' opinions will be taken more into consideration if you are a young person, who (as almost everyone) have them on social media; whereas an old person is not very much up to date of all the new trends in the world, perhaps not even have social media, so these opinions are unlikely to be important for them.
Secondly, old people, of course, have some role models; but the times have changed a lot, to the extent that celebrities are now not in the least concerned about being more vocal. In the past, celebrities were particularly not very interested on talking about different issues. They did not involve that much with their fans. Drawing from my own experience, I see this as a very normal situation, I see celebrities commenting on political issues, feminist issues, etc; even if those fields are not related to them, they do speak up. Moreover, freedom of speech now have massively changed the way we can express in any circumstance. People are fearless to express their thoughts and young people especially want to hear what their favorite football player thinks about racism, as an example. We have started to follow celebrities not only because of why they're famous for, but also for what they think, say and wear. It is certainly clear to see why for young generations these opinions are taken in a more relevant way than for older generations.
In light of the above-mentioned reasons, I strongly believe that for young generations is more important celebrities' opinions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 854, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: they're
...low celebrities not only because of why theyre famous for, but also for what they thin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, whereas, of course, talking about, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1984.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 413.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80387409201 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50803742585 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70187324155 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.510895883777 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 638.1 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.0910255793 48.9658058833 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.705882353 100.406767564 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2941176471 20.6045352989 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35294117647 5.45110844103 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210590564348 0.236089414692 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0701159973503 0.076458572812 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0367836271553 0.0737576698707 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132392772503 0.150856017488 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0282424900051 0.0645574589148 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 11.7677419355 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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