Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? the opinions of celebrities , such as famous celebrities or athletes, are more important to young people than they are to older people
By and large, since the dawn of civilization, in all societies all around the world, from a tiny tribe in a desert to enormous multicultural cities in the developed countries, elder people always have got a high position among kids and relatives and their ideas and opinions about all aspect of life could be assumed as a light in dark circumstances. However, a controversial question raised here is that with developments in technologies and the appearance of renowned and famous people like celebrities and athletes who are amazingly appealed the young people by their fame, wealth and lifestyle, how the opinions of these celebrities are important to younger people than they to older people. Some people may hold the view that they have not got any significant effects on the youth, but some others may take an opposite view points and believe that because of some tempting impediments of which they have got in their lives, they could have tremendous influences on young people and it has been assumed a great many of younger people are advocating their opinion about the diverse range of subjects. In my viewpoint, in firmly agree with former one and in the following paragraphs, I will delve into the most outstanding reasons and examples.
The first exquisite points to be mentioned here is that elder people all through of their lives have acquired a great many of invaluable experiences about how we can live successfully as well as achieve our purposes even in short time without any errors and mistakes, etc. Consequently, most of the time without doubt younger people cannot gain such crucial experiments without taking mistakes and using the elder people experience will definitely reduce our efforts and hesitations to gain our goals.
Moreover, another significant point is that in today's world because of the limitation of resources and the growing of population, the majority of younger people would rather use the wise and convenient approaches and method to eliminate their competitors for example taking a job or being accepted in a high rank university and the best choice for them is that using the elder people' opinions like their grandparents. To illustrate this matter, a result of research project in our university's department of sociology conducted on 356 young people, aged18-30 years old, has been demonstrated that about two thirds of them use the advice of elder people in their family for a proper and effective decision-making for future.
To wrap it up, all the aforementioned reasons lead us to a conclusion that elder people opinions are of a prominent role in the elevation of young people's quality of lives through their invaluable experiences which be never found in anywhere or any time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, however, if, may, moreover, so, third, well, for example, in short, as well as, by and large, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 13.8261648746 166% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 72.0 52.1666666667 138% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2284.0 1977.66487455 115% => OK
No of words: 451.0 407.700716846 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06430155211 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60833598836 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84796662708 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 238.0 212.727598566 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527716186253 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 727.2 618.680645161 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.6003584229 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 50.0 20.1344086022 248% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 83.4013056119 48.9658058833 170% => OK
Chars per sentence: 253.777777778 100.406767564 253% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 50.1111111111 20.6045352989 243% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 14.4444444444 5.45110844103 265% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270236001405 0.236089414692 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117755430065 0.076458572812 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110445131544 0.0737576698707 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148416431804 0.150856017488 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0957631916232 0.0645574589148 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 27.5 11.7677419355 234% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 20.73 58.1214874552 36% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 6.10430107527 239% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.8 10.1575268817 224% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.96 10.9000537634 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.93 8.01818996416 124% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 86.8835125448 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 31.0 10.002688172 310% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 22.0 10.0537634409 219% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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