Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In order to become financially responsible adults, children should learn to manage their own money at young age.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
With the increasing attention to the financial problems, today, people have to control their money sources suitably. In this regard, some people think that the process of managing money should be thought within the childhood. In contrast, many thinks that it is not essential for children to learn about the managing of their money. I firmly believe that children should not be forced to learn about money-handling techniques because they would have enough potential for learning this process in the adulthood. In addition, children cannot learn the ways to manage their own money properly due to the lack of money in their pockets.
Some studies have shown that people have more potential for learning complex techniques, once they become older. Indeed, it is hard to teach a child processes integrated with complexities. On the other hand, managing money is associated with some difficult processes such as controlling expenses and assets technique, saving money on the critical times, spending less on inefficient merchandises, and etc. On the basis of the above discussion, it is not crucial teaching children what they are not able to learn. In addition, it does not seem pragmatic to teach young-age children about a challenge which in not sensible for them.
In most practical cases, those who want to teach a lesson say that learners receive information more easily when they experience the real situation. In this regard, children who are forcing to learn the managing techniques are experiencing unreal situation. It is hard to learn a child to save his money once he does not have it. Even if they have money, they do not have freedom to spend it. As a result, trying to teach children money techniques is not efficient in the childhood.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 70, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to complex'
Suggestion: to complex
...people have more potential for learning complex techniques, once they become older. Ind...
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Line 2, column 398, Rule ID: AND_ETC[1]
Message: Use simply 'etc.'.
Suggestion: etc.
...nding less on inefficient merchandises, and etc. On the basis of the above discussion, i...
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Line 3, column 150, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...hen they experience the real situation. In this regard, children who are forcing t...
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Line 3, column 191, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'learning'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'force' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: learning
...n this regard, children who are forcing to learn the managing techniques are experiencin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, in addition, in contrast, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 13.8261648746 14% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1462.0 1977.66487455 74% => OK
No of words: 289.0 407.700716846 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05882352941 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69718244948 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 212.727598566 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.512110726644 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 618.680645161 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.696884744 48.9658058833 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.4666666667 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2666666667 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.86666666667 5.45110844103 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221647577824 0.236089414692 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0857411356975 0.076458572812 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0517366883505 0.0737576698707 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156902881507 0.150856017488 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.061198504777 0.0645574589148 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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