In the past decade, as time marches on, the development of science and technology has drastically changed people’s lives in a short period of time. On that ground, one of the substantial advancements is the invention of the internet. In this regard, many people think that access to the internet is enormously beneficial to both individuals and communities as a whole. On the other hand, another group of people consider it as an exaggeration, and apparently, hold the opposite view. From my vantage point, the former view contains more weight. In the following paragraphs, I will delve into the most conspicuous reasons and examples justifying my stance.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is that the internet has made complex lives easier and comfortable compared to the past days. In particular, with the help of the internet, people can work remotely in their own flexible ways, while in the past, people used to travel far distances for their work purposes. Not only this but also, the internet facilitates immensely to students at their educational level. back when there was no internet facility available, students, used to invest a lot of time finding information in academic books and journals which was very time-consuming for them. These days, however, students can find all those information on the internet within a glimpse of a second. For instance, nowadays, students prefer to study through online classes while working part-time from home. Hence, this example demonstrates how the internet has made our lives peaceful and easy to handle.
Another reason that deserves some words is that although there is a group of people who think that the internet has created social distancing in the community, I believe that with the help of the internet people feel close to each other by communicating more than ever before. When there was no internet in earlier days, people had limited choices to contact their relatives. One of them was mailing which used to take several days to months to reach the other location. On the other side, the emergence of internet technology provides faster ways to communicate with others whereby people could feel the real sense of closeness. Drawing from my personal experience, last year I moved abroad to pursue my further studies. At that time, I started feeling homesick as I was away from my home for the first time. Fortunately,
Therefore, I am convinced that the internet does its job very well in terms of social connections.
Lastly, I would say that people not only save money but also conserve a lot of their day-to-day time with the help of the internet. Research conducted at the University of California shows that at least 70% of people prefer online shopping over traditional shopping in the states. In fact, online shopping gives striking deals at the online platform whereby people can save a lot of money after each purchase by using different coupons. What is more, is that people save a lot more time as they do not need to roam around in the shopping malls. Thus, the internet supplies various forms of platforms which could be beneficial to people.
All in all, by contemplating all remarks. I believe that the internet has a positive effect on our lives. This is because it makes communication and education simple for us. Also, it is proved to be advantageous at the online platform.
- TPO 44 Integrated Writing Task 70
- Broccoli is a vegetable that is popular throughout the United States but it can be grown only in temperate climates with mild summers Because of this limitation 90 percent of the broccoli consumed in the United States is grown in the cooler regions of Cal 80
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement In order to become financially responsible adults children should learn to manage their own money at a young age 73
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement It is more important to read or watch news presented by people whose views are different from your own than it is to read or watch news presented by those whose views are similar to your own 90
- TPO 49 Integrated Writing Task 80
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 133, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...cally changed people’s lives in a short period of time. On that ground, one of the substantial...
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Line 3, column 415, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Back
...to students at their educational level. back when there was no internet facility ava...
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Line 3, column 640, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this information' or 'those informations'?
Suggestion: this information; those informations
...se days, however, students can find all those information on the internet within a glimpse of a s...
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Line 5, column 823, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...my home for the first time. Fortunately, Therefore, I am convinced that the inter...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, first, hence, however, if, lastly, second, so, therefore, thus, well, while, at least, for instance, in fact, in particular, what is more, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.0286738351 172% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 89.0 52.1666666667 171% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2817.0 1977.66487455 142% => OK
No of words: 564.0 407.700716846 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99468085106 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.87326216964 4.48103885553 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73085276758 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 293.0 212.727598566 138% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.519503546099 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 882.0 618.680645161 143% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.94265232975 243% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.6003584229 141% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.1694650239 48.9658058833 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.1379310345 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4482758621 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.1724137931 5.45110844103 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12152580897 0.236089414692 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0345112124205 0.076458572812 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0370225516442 0.0737576698707 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0634810745425 0.150856017488 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0157956485429 0.0645574589148 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 138.0 86.8835125448 159% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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