Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents are the best teachers. Use specific
reasons and examples to support your answer.
Obviously, in most cases the earliest teachers people have are their parents, and parents are generally most
concerned about the development of their children. However, it is not completely true to say that parents are the
best teachers.
First of all, not all parents are good teachers. As normal individuals, some parents more or less have some
bad habits. Even though parents almost instinctively devote themselves to cultivating their offspring, the outcome
might turn out to be disappointment, for all children tend to unconsciously or subconsciously copy everything
including bad ones from their parents. Another deficiency of parents as teachers is the fact that most parents are
lack of common senses of education. All too often we observe some parents tend to pursue their cherished but
failed dream by forcing their children to develop in a prearranged direction. Ironically, when their children do not
follow the instructions, the children will be regarded as disobedient or allegedly rebellious. In fact, it is parents
rather than their children that virtually disobey common senses.
Moreover, some parents are qualified as good teachers, but not all of them are the best ones. When children
are in the preliminary school, it is not surprising that parents are perhaps capable of teaching their children almost
every subject even better than professional teachers in the school. But the situation will not last long. We live in a
world where knowledge is accumulated by multiplying and at the same time becomes more and more specialized.
Therefore, to be a professional in a certain field today takes much longer time than has ever been before. No
parent is able to be professional in all fields, though they might be experts in one or more fields. Wise parents
often release rather than charge their children as early as possible. They are aware of the possibility outside the
family.
Parents may, nevertheless, help their children much more than do good teachers. Most parts of children
education are virtually beyond teachers' reaches. It is parents that supplement. Psychology studies have shown us
that parents' love sometimes has astonishingly magic power to their children. Albeit Einstein's mother and that of
Forest Gump are both good examples. On the other hand, parents might do their children harm more than do bad
teachers as well. The natures of those children whose parents have divorced are often severely distorted. In a
word, it is rather superficial to simply say that parents are the best teachers.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
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Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2199.0 1977.66487455 111% => OK
No of words: 409.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37652811736 4.8611393121 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49708221141 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84221179246 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 212.727598566 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.496332518337 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 645.3 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
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Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
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Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.0388714609 48.9658058833 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.96 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.36 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.04 5.45110844103 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 23.0 4.53405017921 507% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 114.0 5.5376344086 2059% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135742346901 0.236089414692 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0549399384919 0.076458572812 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0512255322957 0.0737576698707 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0485687339008 0.150856017488 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0423854876656 0.0645574589148 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 11.7677419355 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 10.9000537634 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.