Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: children should spend most of their time on studying and playing, they shouldn’t be required to help family with household chores, such as cleaning and cooking.
With the development of society and advancement of technology, more high-quality people needed in the society. Most of people generally start to pay closely attention to their children’s education and expect their kids to become a outstanding people. In addition, some people believe that children ought to spend most of their time on studying and playing and other people contend that they should be required to help family with household chores. In my opinion, I prefer the first idea.
To begin with, children are able to obtain a most satisfactory job sooner or later what bases on the large knowledge reservoir and have a brilliant success at work, if a large part of time will be used on studying. It is optimal for children at 16 age to study since at that time, the brain of children is the most sensitive in their entire life. Thus that the more knowledge can be accepted by this age children swiftly, which is able to become a strong condition in their success way. The recent researches indicate that most of people who are in success almost contribute their whole teenager life to study so that they can make more contribution on a number of realms. As a result, the knowledge is a cement base for someone’s success at work.
In addition, if children take their most of time to play, thinking independent and problem-solving ability could get a more striking improvement than children who spend a plenty of time on helping family chores. That’s because when they play alone or with their friends, they will not stop thinking. Since once they and their friends gather together, they will find something which they can make themselves enjoy. Therefore they will open their mind and use their brains to think that how to play and what rules they have to set up, and during the process, their brains will gain a sufficient development. For instance, when I was 12 years old, I favored to play with my friends and every time I gathered my friends to try to the new things that we never did for almost whole day. At that time, we shared our ideas and thought what we did we do and then found the feats of the games and improvement. Until I was 15 years old, I own the fastest speed of accepting the knowledge so that I always maintained a No.1 in my class, since the ability of self-thinking. All in all, children who play more will own more advantage on studying.
Finally, children use much more time on helping family with chores is able to boost the ability of living alone. Doing many chores can offer a chance to gain a lot of living skills that’s because chores the children just do now what is that they do in the future life. Spending more time on studying and playing, however, will more advantageous to the independent life in the future. Because these can ask children to have their own views for everything so that they can make better choices when they counter the things which they have to make choice. This will play a important role on their way to get independent which is more optimal way than the way of helping their family with chores.
In conclusion, I believe that let children spending more time on doing chores is good mothed for the development, but playing and studying are able to make them beneficial more.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 112, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'Most of', you should use 'the' ('Most of the people') or simply say ''Most people''.
Suggestion: Most of the people; Most people
...h-quality people needed in the society. Most of people generally start to pay closely attentio...
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Line 1, column 235, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ucation and expect their kids to become a outstanding people. In addition, some p...
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Line 7, column 348, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...he most sensitive in their entire life. Thus that the more knowledge can be accepted...
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Line 7, column 524, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...ay. The recent researches indicate that most of people who are in success almost contribute th...
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Line 11, column 420, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...g which they can make themselves enjoy. Therefore they will open their mind and use their...
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Line 15, column 573, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...hey have to make choice. This will play a important role on their way to get inde...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, so, then, therefore, thus, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 24.0 11.0286738351 218% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 65.0 43.0788530466 151% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 82.0 52.1666666667 157% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2710.0 1977.66487455 137% => OK
No of words: 576.0 407.700716846 141% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70486111111 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.89897948557 4.48103885553 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58387872734 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 249.0 212.727598566 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.432291666667 0.524837075471 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 823.5 618.680645161 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.1956469456 48.9658058833 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.826086957 100.406767564 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0434782609 20.6045352989 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.26086956522 5.45110844103 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 21.0 11.8709677419 177% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250890360301 0.236089414692 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.085028145762 0.076458572812 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0702363365453 0.0737576698707 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139792574253 0.150856017488 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0756280679803 0.0645574589148 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 11.7677419355 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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