I agree with the statement that children from 15 to 18 ages should take their decisions on their own. The kids from this age group are very enthusiastic, capable of completing any task and additionally this age group is adventurous.
Most of the Indian parents decide about 'what his children will be' at the time of his/ her only. They want their child to complete their wish of becoming this and that and they literally force their kid to complete this. They think that If kids don't get 90% marks in exam they are not capable of doing any thing. In Indian movie 'Three Idiots' it was shown that one character from movie wanted to become photographer but parents forced him to finish engineering. He was not good at this so he faced depression and he was not ready to discuss this with his parents. Finally he talks with parents about his dream and became successful photographer. In such cases kids should take their own decisions. If he had decided this in his teenage he would have been successful earlier.
After 18 age Indian law has given right to vote. This means up to age 18 child develop his thought process. Mentally and physically they are strong enough to take decisions. with the advanced help of technology child gets to know about others experiences. In today's world its not necessary to take your own experience you can learn from others experience. Its right that parents have faced changing world, they have more experience. But kids of this age are in the state of make or break. They can decide what they want and their desire will lead them in successful life.
We need to change with time even now days its been crucial to be ahead of time. so Decisions taken in early ages will help you to plan future properly in case one fails to achieve his dreams then he can restart again. If others take our decision then we might fail but we can go any extend to prove our decision right which ultimately leads in success.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, so, then, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 59.0 43.0788530466 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1590.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 349.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5558739255 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33134309591 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530085959885 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.7111662208 48.9658058833 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 75.7142857143 100.406767564 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.619047619 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.52380952381 5.45110844103 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147332685781 0.236089414692 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0495455320535 0.076458572812 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0616918351289 0.0737576698707 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10004965015 0.150856017488 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0354081730651 0.0645574589148 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 11.7677419355 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.87 10.9000537634 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.96 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 86.8835125448 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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