In recent years, world is much more competitive and changing at an enormous speed with advent of new ideas and concepts. People are now more provident and always try to make plan to ensure better future of their kids. Many people might argue that people of previous generations also involved in development of their children's activities. But from my perspective, I hold the view that nowadays parents are more serious about kids' education and following paragraphs present a cursory glance of most compelling reasons.
First and foremost, the main reason I hold this view is that parents nowadays are more educated and always prioritize the importance of education in life. In our generation, most of the people did not have the opportunity to get higher education. Many of them are uneducated as well. And those who got educated, they left school as soon as they found a job or a source of income. Thus, they do not feel the necessity of education and sometimes they can not get involved due to their lacking in knowledge in that field. But nowadays, most of the parents are educated and know latest trend. So, they always plan for their kids accordingly and try their best to get involved in their learning.
Moreover, if we look around, we can feel that their is a competition between people. People always discuss and share about their kids' success and feel proud of their achievements. Hence, many parents take it a challenge to bring out the best from their children and always encourage and get involved in learning of them. For example, my parents always asked me to take coaching on math or buy more books, when they found that one of our relative's kid was doing the same.
Finally, due to involvement of different child care organizations, which always encourage people to be their child's guide, parents are becoming more responsible about their kid's every aspect. Also, from online blogs and social media, they try to learn how can they help in their child's activity and increase involvement in their educational needs. A recent survey conducted on my school shows that, 78% of parents check and help their kids on their daily assignment and 83% of them always attend regular meeting with teachers. These 2 data shows increment in involvement compared to 10 years before and indicates current trend of parent's mentality towards children's education.
In conclusion, contemplating the aforementioned reasons and examples, it is safe to say that people today are more involved in their children's learning system.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'know the latest'.
Suggestion: know the latest
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Line 5, column 47, Rule ID: THEIR_IS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: there
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, finally, first, hence, if, look, moreover, so, thus, well, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 13.8261648746 174% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2113.0 1977.66487455 107% => OK
No of words: 423.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99527186761 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53508145475 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65015089091 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522458628842 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 642.6 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.7801458016 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.65 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.15 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.45 5.45110844103 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254038766855 0.236089414692 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0839694964715 0.076458572812 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0495868688294 0.0737576698707 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164788027321 0.150856017488 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0156252484923 0.0645574589148 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 86.8835125448 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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