Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?In the past, young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them; today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives.
There is no little doubt that human's characteristic is changing gradually and is making progress in many aspects in compare with those who used to live many centuries ago. One of the most significant changes which has been occurred in last years, is that young people's dependency on their parents has been dramatically reduced. This phenomenon has several reasons from my vantage point. In the subsequent paragraphs, I will elaborate on my perspective.
The most exquisite point to be mentioned is that education gradually made children wiser than their illiterate parents. They could grow their knowledge in many fields which could come in use in their personal lives for making decisions. To shed light on this, let me come up with an example. When my aunt wanted to start studying in the university, my grandfather used to insist her on choosing biology for her major. Although, based on some personality test, she had understood that studying engineering is a better choice for her. So she started studying engineering, regardless of my grandfather's interest and eventually she became a really successful person in her field of study and research while before her, other children used to follow their father's interest due to the lack of knowledge.
Another equally important fact to be considered is that in the past young people used to start their carrier based on their parents' one. In this situation, they used to follow their parents' way and start working beside them and being paid by them. In such a case, their parents were also their employee who used to deprive them of the opportunity to become independent in making decisions. My father's experience is a compelling example of this, he started farming beside my grandfather when he was only 18 years old, then, when he wanted to marry, my grandfather forced him to marry someone that he did not used to love. He just accepted this due to the fact that nerveless they might have loosed his job. But that marriage was not a successful and ended with divorce 4 years later.
Admittedly, parents still can have very crucial role in their children's lives, they can lead them to grow their social abilities in order to become successful in the society, they can encourage them to find better jobs and they can make them aware of the benefits and disadvantages of their choice. Statistics show that children who use their parents’ advises in their lives are 60% more successful than those who do not. This is of course due to the fact that parents are the best one who knows their children’s personality and care about their improvement most.
All in all, I contend in the past, young people used to be too dependent on their parents than today, in spite of the fact that this could adversely affect their lives. This seems to have been due to the lack of knowledge or job independency which used to lead them follow what their parents wanted and ignore their own desire. However, nowadays parents can lead their children in the better way, in which they still have sufficient space for making decisions for them-selves.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 262, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'peoples'' or 'people's'?
Suggestion: peoples'; people's
...n occurred in last years, is that young peoples dependency on their parents has been dr...
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Line 5, column 608, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'use'
Suggestion: use
...ed him to marry someone that he did not used to love. He just accepted this due to t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, really, so, still, then, while, of course, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 23.0 11.0286738351 209% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 84.0 43.0788530466 195% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 75.0 52.1666666667 144% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2571.0 1977.66487455 130% => OK
No of words: 526.0 407.700716846 129% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88783269962 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.78901763229 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61093348139 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 261.0 212.727598566 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.496197718631 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 779.4 618.680645161 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.6221361256 48.9658058833 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.863636364 100.406767564 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9090909091 20.6045352989 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.54545454545 5.45110844103 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.323942254302 0.236089414692 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0998349140288 0.076458572812 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.082203588664 0.0737576698707 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199851203688 0.150856017488 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0852957055975 0.0645574589148 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 86.8835125448 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.