Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In the past, young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them; today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays, No one can cast doubt on making the perfect decision has paramount significance among parents and their young adult, and the independence decision is becoming trendy among families. I am empathetic that young adults are better able to decide about their own lives recently. If I were asked to determine a couple of reasons standing behind my perspective, I would empathetically suggest that social media and the opportunity to attend university illuminate the path of thinking independently in the last decade. I will manifest my reasons in the subsequent paragraphs.
It is without an adumbration of doubt that the internet plays an essential role in young people life thereby, the youth can make the decision correctly without their parent's control and interfering, on the top of everything else the supervising social media such as Instagram and Facebook psychology pages can make more accessible to young people to decide their own future. My personal experience is compelling evidence for what I mean when I have wanted to marry my wife; I have meticulously checked the psychology consultation pages about getting married and becoming a successful man. Hence I decided to marry Sara, not without independent thinking.
it also goes without declaring that the academic ambiance like the universities not only is a good place to learn how to make a decision about our own life, but also is it enhancing the chance of success among young adults, neither was there not this opportunity for our parents in the past nor is there in recent
to be more specific, When I attended the Isfahan university of technology, I saw the people who were studying abroad, and I was seeing them how to struggle to become successful; as a result, I was going to study abroad independently.
It can be summed up in accentuating that today young people are better decision-makers without their own parents. Whether or not accepting that the young people make the decision independently today, by means of the internet-based social media and the academic material like the universities and colleges, the young person can make the decision better than their parents to make decisions for them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, i mean, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1841.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 358.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14245810056 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97302379904 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525139664804 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 594.9 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.6003584229 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 20.1344086022 174% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 146.984897183 48.9658058833 300% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 184.1 100.406767564 183% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.8 20.6045352989 174% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 5.45110844103 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.384835229252 0.236089414692 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.158477546904 0.076458572812 207% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.129883306367 0.0737576698707 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211478064158 0.150856017488 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.130629161182 0.0645574589148 202% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.7 11.7677419355 176% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.49 58.1214874552 47% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.10430107527 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.1 10.1575268817 178% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 10.9000537634 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.01818996416 116% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.0537634409 159% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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