Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In the past, young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them; today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays, No one can cast doubt on making the perfect decision has paramount significance in the among parents and their young adult, and the independence decision is becoming a trendy among families. it is my empathetic belief that young adults are better able to make decision about their own lives recently. If I were asked to determine a couple of reasons standing behind my point of view, I would empathetically suggest that the both social media and opportunity of attending to university illuminate the path of thinking independently in last decade. I will manifest my reasons in the subsequently paragraphs.
it is without an adumbration of doubt that the internet plays important role in young people life thereby, the youth can make decision perfectly without their parent's control and interfering, on the top of everything else the supervising social media such as Instagram and Facebook psychology pages can make easier to young people to make decision about their own future. my personal experience is compelling evidence for what I mean when I have wanted to marring with my wife, I have meticulously checked the psychology consultation pages about how to married and become a successful man, Hence I decided to married with Sara not without independence thinking.
it also goes without declaring that the academic ambiance like the universities not only is good place to learn how to make decision about our own life, but also is it enhancing the chance of success among young adults, neither was there not this opportunity for our parents in the past, nor is there in recent
to be more specific, When I attended into the Isfahan university of technology, I was seeing the people who was studying abroad and I was seeing them how to struggling to become successful, as result, I was going to study abroad independently.
Moreover, While the old generation hold old-fashioned and outmoded views, the youngsters today is a generation of the internet, who are proficient in using the internet to search and procure the most helpful and relevant information from immense amount of data online. The youngsters are capable of making better decisions based on these information. For instance, through the internet, I have learned tons of knowledge about the life of studying abroad and the way to prepare TOEFL, helping me to make decisions on these issues.
it can be summed up in accentuating that today young people are better decision maker without intervening of own parents. whether or not accepting that the young people make decision independently today, by means of the internet based social media and the academic material like the universities and colleges, the young person can make decision better than their parents to make decisions for them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, moreover, so, while, for instance, i mean, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 10.4613686534 191% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 5.04856512141 139% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 7.30242825607 219% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 10.0 12.0772626932 83% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 22.412803532 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 68.0 30.3222958057 224% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 13.0 5.01324503311 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2332.0 1373.03311258 170% => OK
No of words: 454.0 270.72406181 168% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13656387665 5.08290768461 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61598047577 4.04702891845 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87432021585 2.5805825403 111% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 145.348785872 155% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.495594713656 0.540411800872 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 746.1 419.366225166 178% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 3.25607064018 338% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 8.23620309051 49% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.25165562914 320% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.51434878587 198% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 13.0662251656 92% => OK
Sentence length: 37.0 21.2450331126 174% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 133.811719924 49.2860985944 271% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 194.333333333 110.228320801 176% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.8333333333 21.698381199 174% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06452816374 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.09492273731 147% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 4.19205298013 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 4.33554083885 254% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 4.45695364238 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.408310495612 0.272083759551 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1666390946 0.0996497079465 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.128115247916 0.0662205650399 193% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207682767321 0.162205337803 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.121580069806 0.0443174109184 274% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.7 13.3589403974 162% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.92 53.8541721854 63% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 5.55761589404 202% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 11.0289183223 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.2367328918 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.42419426049 110% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 63.6247240618 173% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 10.7273730684 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.498013245 160% => OK
text_standard: 22.0 11.2008830022 196% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 20 minutes.
Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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