Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In the past, young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them; today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays, No one can cast doubt on making the perfect decision has paramount significance in the among parents and their young adult, and the independence decision is becoming a trendy among families. it is my empathetic belief that young adults are better able to make decision about their own lives recently. If I were asked to determine a couple of reasons standing behind my point of view, I would empathetically suggest that the both social media and opportunity of attending to university illuminate the path of thinking independently in last decade. I will manifest my reasons in the subsequently paragraphs.
it is without an adumbration of doubt that the internet plays important role in young people life thereby, the youth can make decision perfectly without their parent's control and interfering, on the top of everything else the supervising social media such as Instagram and Facebook psychology pages can make easier to young people to make decision about their own future. my personal experience is compelling evidence for what I mean when I have wanted to marring with my wife, I have meticulously checked the psychology consultation pages about how to married and become a successful man, Hence I decided to married with Sara not without independence thinking.
it also goes without declaring that the academic ambiance like the universities not only is good place to learn how to make decision about our own life, but also is it enhancing the chance of success among young adults, neither was there not this opportunity for our parents in the past, nor is there in recent
to be more specific, When I attended into the Isfahan university of technology, I was seeing the people who was studying abroad and I was seeing them how to struggling to become successful, as result, I was going to study abroad independently.
it can be summed up in accentuating that today young people are better decision maker without intervening of own parents. whether or not accepting that the young people make decision independently today, by means of the internet based social media and the academic material like the universities and colleges, the young person can make decision better than their parents to make decisions for them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, i mean, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1883.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 369.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10298102981 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8755213743 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.509485094851 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 605.7 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.6003584229 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 41.0 20.1344086022 204% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 143.688706739 48.9658058833 293% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 209.222222222 100.406767564 208% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 41.0 20.6045352989 199% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.55555555556 5.45110844103 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.40582582195 0.236089414692 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.189712167485 0.076458572812 248% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.137122680659 0.0737576698707 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223996069081 0.150856017488 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.127048467771 0.0645574589148 197% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.1 11.7677419355 196% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.86 58.1214874552 51% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.10430107527 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.3 10.1575268817 190% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.19 10.9000537634 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.01818996416 119% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 10.002688172 150% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.4 10.0537634409 183% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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