Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People are happier when they give away extra money to charity or a good cause rather than when they spend it on themselves.
Regarding the attitude of how to use the extra money, answers can vary drastically depending on one's background and personality. Some people choose to donate the money to charity, while others rather spend it on themselves. Personally, I do not think that making charity makes me happier, and I will explain why I stand this viewpoint in the following essay.
To begin with, I enjoy buying things. Maybe the reason sounds shallow, but I believe many people have the same opinion. To suffer the difficult life, I often buy the product which is not necessary to reward myself. For example, at the end of month, if I have already paid all the bills and saved some money, I will go to the department store or browse the shopping website to purchase a product I want, in order to relieve myself and forget the stress from working. Hence, spending money on myself is good to my mental health.
Furthermore, except for buying products, traveling to other place if I have extra money also cheers me. Going to a trip, I can shortly escape my life and experience something new. For instance, I usually go on small trip in my leisure time to enjoy the laid-back atmosphere and leave all the task behind. If I spend my money on charity, I am unable to relax during my holiday. Hence, it certainly will not make me happier.
Lastly, giving money to charity fulfill a sense of good feeling of doing right things. Nevertheless, I do not believe I am supposed to feel guilty if I choose not to donate the money. Limit money do I earn, I do not have the ability to show my kindness by spending money. Instead, I would rather just to do some volunteer work to increase the social benefit because I will be grieved deeply if lacking money.
In a nutshell, I firmly believe that comparing to donate money, using money on myself makes me happier. It is because I need some products or events to relax myself, and it all require money. Moreover, not a sense of satisfaction but a sense of sadness I will I gain from giving money to charity.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, lastly, may, moreover, nevertheless, regarding, so, while, except for, for example, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 15.1003584229 26% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1668.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 365.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5698630137 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53582327849 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52602739726 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 536.4 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2364140511 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.4 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.25 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.3 5.45110844103 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191072489225 0.236089414692 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0638158367113 0.076458572812 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0473613635231 0.0737576698707 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115262248297 0.150856017488 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.052872185635 0.0645574589148 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 11.7677419355 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, lastly, may, moreover, nevertheless, regarding, so, while, except for, for example, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 15.1003584229 26% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1668.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 365.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5698630137 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53582327849 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52602739726 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 536.4 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2364140511 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.4 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.25 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.3 5.45110844103 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191072489225 0.236089414692 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0638158367113 0.076458572812 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0473613635231 0.0737576698707 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115262248297 0.150856017488 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.052872185635 0.0645574589148 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 11.7677419355 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.