Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People are never satisfied with what they have; they always want something more or something different. Use specific reasons to support your answer.
satisfaction is a slightly complicated issue. some people are naturally satisfied with what they have. other individuals revere a minimalistic lifestyle and try to live accordingly. However, most human beings are always out looking for something better or different than what they own. Hence, it would be reasonable for me to agree with the statement that humans are seldom satisfied with their share of life. I will explore in the following essay some potential rationales behind this.
To begin with, the majority of individuals would agree with the notion that dissatisfaction with the status quo is the main propellent behind all progress that was achieved by humans. In other words, we could say that we learn more from our failures than from our successes. A student who feels that he is not fully understanding his class will definitely seek to ask his peers or his professors for more explanations. As a consequence, he will end up grasping the subject matter of his courses better than another student who is simply satisfied with the amount of knowledge he has. our dream of holding a screen between our fingers that could provide us with a massive amount of information and through which we could do tasks such as shopping, doing business and talking to friends, started with simple discontent with the size of the early computers that one of them occupied an entire warehouse.
On top of that. In the eyes of the present day society, sticking to what we got could have unfavorable ramifications. My own experience is a compelling example on that. I was chosen with two other friends to represent our town in a chess championship. Thus, we met and began to train for the games ahead of us. since this was a local league, we did not expect to see professional players among our opponents. consequently, our training sessions were simple and we did not attempt to test our performance against other players outside of our team. When we went to compete in this event, we were obviously shocked due to the higher levels of mastery that other teams demonstrated. As a result, we did not make it past the opening games. Had we strived to perfection during our exercises, we would have accomplished some advancement in this competition instead of getting kicked out dishonorably.
To sum up, it's clear as day to me that most people are not content with what they have and that's a good thing since satisfaction could have a deleterious effect on the long run.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, consequently, hence, however, if, look, so, thus, such as, as a result, in other words, to begin with, to sum up, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 59.0 43.0788530466 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 67.0 52.1666666667 128% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2059.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 422.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87914691943 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53239876712 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82495465711 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 242.0 212.727598566 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57345971564 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 625.5 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.7668305445 48.9658058833 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.5909090909 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1818181818 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.40909090909 5.45110844103 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217995083635 0.236089414692 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.062415167173 0.076458572812 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0878054356315 0.0737576698707 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15826794549 0.150856017488 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.097136456766 0.0645574589148 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 86.8835125448 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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