Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People are never satisfied with what they have; they always want something more or something different. Use specific reasons to support your answer.
Nowadays, it is very common to hear people complaining about their life, and the things that
they do not have. I completely agree that people are unsatisfied, and they are in constant
mood of having something more or different. I think this way for two main reasons that I will
explain in the subsequent paragraphs.
First of all, people are focus on the things that they do not possess, but they would like to
have, most of the time to belong a specific social group. It is possible to appreciate this
situation in many contexts. For example, in the technology industry, to be more specific cell
phones industry, it is normal to see new models of phones almost every moth. As a result,
people are always looking for getting the new one, even when they have a phone that works
well. Another example, would be fashion. In the market for every season there is a new
collection of clothes, therefore it creates an unnecessary need in the people for getting new
clothes even though they do not need it.
Secondly, people are used to comparing themselves with people that have an ideal life
according to our society. For instance, when we are young our parents tell us that we have to
study a degree, but something good enough to have a good job and earn money, because
that would give us the opportunity to buy a house, a car, travel, etc. Nevertheless, we are in a
constant fight for getting the big house with pool, the latest model car, the expensive trips and
even more.
In conclusion, people are not pleased with their possessions, they want more and better
things. This is because they ignore the things they already have. Besides people are always
exposed to be compared with someone else, provoking the wish of having the things that
others have.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Besides,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, if, look, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1480.0 1977.66487455 75% => OK
No of words: 311.0 407.700716846 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75884244373 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44488041964 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.524115755627 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 618.680645161 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.0151748552 48.9658058833 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.6666666667 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7333333333 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6666666667 5.45110844103 196% => OK
Paragraphs: 20.0 4.53405017921 441% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.318145542142 0.236089414692 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113680304136 0.076458572812 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0807735515306 0.0737576698707 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0946986555407 0.150856017488 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0845142269245 0.0645574589148 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 86.8835125448 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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