ORGANIC FOOD
According to the Reading and the lecturer, they both are about organic and traditional grown food. The main difference between them is that the reading tends to support organic food and the lecturer, on the other hand, says that there is no big difference from one to the other.
First, the Reading stated that in the traditionally grown food there are many chemicals used to control pests – which is the first reason why people begin to purchase organic foods. In addition to that, the Reading also explains that organic produce has become quite popular because it is healthier for humans and the environment and you do not run the risk of ingesting chemicals.
In comparison to that, the lecturer says that people started buying organic food because they think that organic products are healthier than traditionally grown food. The lecturer also stated that traditionally grown food contains just a tiny amount of chemicals and that actually that it is not a problem because fruits and vegetables are washed twice before they get to the supermarket and that eliminates almost all of the chemicals; Also, the lecturer says that chemical arent been shown that are bad for people or the environment.
Second, the Reading mention the environmental reasons to buy organic produce wich are: less risk of wáter pollution, less risk of imbalances and disturbances in the surrounding ecosystems and people safety. On the other hand, the lecturer exposes that exists laws to protect water and the environment, that chemical pollution is not very likely to occurred and actually, it doesn't really affect much the environment around it. The lecturer also stated that farms that are not managed properly can affect the environment but that chemicals don't make a huge impact.
To conclude, the Reading supports the idea of choosing organic food and all its benefits; in spite of that, the lecturer explains there is no need to worry about choosing organic food instead of traditionally grown food because they are just the same.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, if, really, second, so, in addition, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.4613686534 153% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 7.30242825607 205% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 21.0 12.0772626932 174% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 22.412803532 138% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 30.3222958057 106% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.01324503311 219% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1698.0 1373.03311258 124% => OK
No of words: 334.0 270.72406181 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08383233533 5.08290768461 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.04702891845 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60904051368 2.5805825403 101% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 145.348785872 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.476047904192 0.540411800872 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 520.2 419.366225166 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 11.0 8.23620309051 134% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 2.5761589404 272% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 13.0662251656 77% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 21.2450331126 155% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.0060866881 49.2860985944 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 169.8 110.228320801 154% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.4 21.698381199 154% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06452816374 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 4.19205298013 119% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.394482174359 0.272083759551 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.190697699726 0.0996497079465 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.163908309243 0.0662205650399 248% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.265655456254 0.162205337803 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.129401941401 0.0443174109184 292% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.2 13.3589403974 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.98 53.8541721854 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.0289183223 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.78 12.2367328918 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.42419426049 97% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 63.6247240618 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.7273730684 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.498013245 145% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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