Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? people are never satisfied with what they have, they always want something more or something different.
Since the dawn of humanity, people have had a lot of demands, some of which are housing, friends, convenience, foods, and clothes, to name but a few, and in order to meet their demand, people have tried and increased their abilities. There is a heated controversy among experts as to whether people’s demands are satisfied or their demands change. In this regard, people have different ideas. While some people claim that human beings never can satisfy their demands, others believe otherwise. The idea to which I subscribe is that people’s demands are under constant changes. My viewpoint is based on quite a few reasons, three conspicuous ones of which have been elaborated upon in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, over the decades, people’s life style have been drastically changed. Human beings are greed to consume as much as possible. It stands to reason that advertisement often new products which eases life, and people paying attention to these products feel demand for these goods. In addition, luxury products have become so prevalent and popular in a way that people spend thousands of money to buy. Ironically, in societies in which people buy these ‘’necessary goods” there are many poverty-stricken people who do not have minimum standard.
Additionally, in the light of new technologies, new products arise in a galloping rate, which make people to have new demands. Indeed, in order to keep up with this modern scientific world, people need to buy new electronic devices, and sometimes people renew their devices frequently. At the same time, companies deliberately improve and introduce new technology gradually, which leads to create demand for people constantly. Another point that accelerates this process is that people’s works and everyday life have been closely related to these devices, sometimes people have no way unless buying these new products.
Finally, human beings have some characteristics and tendencies which promote them to experience new things. It is incontrovertibly axiomatic that majority of people become happy to buy new things namely, automobile, and cell phone, to name but three. In fact this tendency is the main reason that causes them new needs. And all of us have had this feeling since our childhood when we were interested to buy new toys, and this behavior does not have ending just emerge in a different fashion.
All in all, I have a penchant for the idea that people’s demands never can be met on the grounds that people’s lifestyle have changed; the development of technology tend to create new demands; people’s inherent tendencies stimulate them to seek new things.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 279, Rule ID: WHETHER[6]
Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "as to"?
Suggestion: whether
...e is a heated controversy among experts as to whether people's demands are satisfied or ...
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Line 7, column 469, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a different fashion" with adverb for "different"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...havior does not have ending just emerge in a different fashion. All in all, I have a penchant f...
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Line 7, column 493, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ing just emerge in a different fashion. All in all, I have a penchant for the id...
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Line 9, column 273, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...cies stimulate them to seek new things.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, so, while, as to, in addition, in fact, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.0286738351 181% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2271.0 1977.66487455 115% => OK
No of words: 428.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30607476636 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.548423998 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00667710515 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535046728972 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 697.5 618.680645161 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 12.0 4.94265232975 243% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.1547595408 48.9658058833 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.55 100.406767564 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.55 5.45110844103 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143344388416 0.236089414692 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0542640280781 0.076458572812 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0329445785649 0.0737576698707 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0924041805812 0.150856017488 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0272378682556 0.0645574589148 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 11.7677419355 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 10.9000537634 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 86.8835125448 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.