Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People behave differently when they wear different clothes. Do you agree that different clothes influence the way people behave? Use specific examples to support your answer.
Behavior is very important thing in our lives. It decides the way of communication with people and our emotions toward them. Some would agree with the idea of clothes influencing on behavior; other would disagree. In my view, I do agree that different clothes influence people’s behavior for two main reasons.
The main reason is that affect of colors on our moods. In order to improve our moods, we need to see comfortable colors, which proofed in science books that these kinds of colors give the feeling of relaxation to the person who looks at them. For example, when you go to beach to relax in your vacation, you can see light blue sea and light green trees. These kind of colors in physiology keeps your mind relaxed which affect your mood and behavior positively. On the other hand, many scientists explain one of the main reasons of depression by some researches on big sample of persons in my home country, it was related to sleeping room colors. As you see wearing clothes with light colors can affect your behavior positively and wearing colorful and dark clothes can do the opposite.
Another reason is that effect of outfits on our bodies. Feeling comfortable or not has main effect on our behavior. For instance, if you are annoyed from something happened, your behavior will be aggressive. So, if you wear tight clothes, you might feel annoyed and stressed all the time, which will make your behavior little offensive, and if you look at the people wearing comfortable clothes, you can find them more funny and friendly than people wear tight clothes. This experience taught me that your outfits can change your attitude and behavior totally.
In sum, through some people may oppose the effect of clothes on our behavior, still I do believe it has big influencer on people’s attitude and behavior. Not only because of colors’ effect on our mood but also the outfit effect on our comfortability. All people should try many kinds of styles and outfits till find the best for their mood and make them comfortable to improve their behavior.
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People behave differently when they wear different clothes. Do you agree that different clothes influence the way people behave? Use specific examples to support your answer. 70
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People behave differently when they wear different clothes. Do you agree that different clothes influence the way people behave? Use specific examples to support your answer. 63
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 355, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'These kinds'?
Suggestion: This kind; These kinds
...e light blue sea and light green trees. These kind of colors in physiology keeps your mind...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, may, so, still, for example, for instance, kind of, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1736.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 353.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9178470255 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56200307441 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.509915014164 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.4934303436 48.9658058833 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.4444444444 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6111111111 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 5.45110844103 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237231389422 0.236089414692 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0746672461622 0.076458572812 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0840907499552 0.0737576698707 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155990712438 0.150856017488 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0628974340379 0.0645574589148 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 86.8835125448 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
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