Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People benefit more from traveling in their own country than from traveling to foreign country.
Many of people have a hectic life in today's world. They spend most of their time in working in a full time job which can be boring for them. One of the solution to run away from this situation is to travel. Some people are inclined toward the idea that it is abundant advantages in traveling inside in your own country. However, other may take an opposite veiwpoint and believe that traveling to international countries are more beneficial for people. In my perspective, there are copious benefits in traveling abroad compare to in their own country since not only people increase their information, but also it is a unique experience to meet other people and learn from them.
The first reason worth mentioning is that people can become more knowledgable by traveling to a foreign country. All countries in our universe have their own history and because of that, they have complex culture, sacred rituals and different language from each other. People can learn about their specific tradition. For example, in many countries people light a ballon and send it to sky. They believe that this work can help their dreams come true. Also, people can gain a better understanding of language of foreign countries. It is a fact that language of many countries is English. Many people have a basic knowledge of English language but by traveling to these countries, they acquire a practical usage of this language and Therefore, they can extend their fundamental skills.
A further more subtle point is that traveling to a foreign country is a great chance to experience new things in life. People travel to other countries to socialize with different people and make new friends who have complex behaviors. Hence, they can learn new things from them like their fashion styles and maybe try a domestic clothes in there. Moreover, people can taste new food by traveling around the world. Some country have the most famous and delicous food around the world which every person heard of it. So, people go to these places and taste this food or even learn how to cook them which is a intersting challenge.
To make a long story short, based on the aforementioned arguments, due to broad our information and experiencing different hobbies in meticulous details, it is vital and necessary for all people to take a trip to another country.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 98, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...pend most of their time in working in a full time job which can be boring for them. One o...
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Line 5, column 608, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...or even learn how to cook them which is a intersting challenge. To make a long ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1935.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 396.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88636363636 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46091344257 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59887133799 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.502525252525 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 602.1 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.0819605261 48.9658058833 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.1428571429 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8571428571 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.7619047619 5.45110844103 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.328347815536 0.236089414692 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105058615854 0.076458572812 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0693763034722 0.0737576698707 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19765997586 0.150856017488 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100851829993 0.0645574589148 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 68.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.5 Out of 30
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