Do you agree or disagree with the following statement People benefit more from traveling in their own country than from traveling to foreign countries Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People benefit more from traveling in their own country than from traveling to foreign countries. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Most works’ environments are the cause of pressure on their employees. So, a doorway to unleash these stresses is traveling. Nowadays, some people believe that traveling abroad has more merits than in their own countries, while others hold precisely the opposite perspective. I subscribe to the view that it is more beneficial to take a trip to our own countries than foreign countries. I will elaborate on my viewpoints in the following paragraphs.
Firstly, traveling inside our own country would positively affect its tourism economy; this would help the circulation of currency by purchasing local goods as souvenirs. On the other hand, people will save more money for emergencies. For instance, last year I took a trip to Moscow, which cost me a fortune. However, this year I decided to take a trip around my own country, Iran; it is noteworthy that I had a long journey rather than the previous one, bought much more commodities, and cost me less than half of the trip to Moscow. Although traveling abroad sounds much more fascinating, looking from another angle helps us realize it is not worth it. Besides, spending on our native products would accelerate this industry development.
Secondly, other benefits of choosing the home country for traveling would enclose people to their roots. Generally speaking, most people are not familiar with their culture and history, while these are the essence of our mother country. In other words, traveling to various segments of our own country and visiting ancient places such as famous gardens, palaces, markets, temples, and so on would teach us significant lessons. For example, Shiraz is a city with rich ancient sites like Eram garden, Vakil market, Persepolis, and even famous tomb of poets like Hafez and Saadi. It is worthwhile to visit such a city and to gain more information about our ancestors. Indeed, traveling can be in conjunction with learning while enjoying every moment of it.
Lastly, there is no denying that foreign countries, as a new medium, can bring superior experiences. One key element of them is communication with foreigners. Furthermore, by choosing an appropriate destination for traveling, people can walk through another chapter of this planet. A suitable example is my friend’s experiences, who had traveled chiefly around the world. She is like a book that each chapter has something interesting to read. She is an enthusiastic person who has earned most of the histories and built architectural information through communicating with foreigners. Generally, brave people are more likely to take such trips rather than others. Most of them are fascinated by these cultures and communications, which led them to choose abroad countries as a destination.
In conclusion, there are several factors to decide for traveling. These have lied in budgets, interests, enthusiasms, curiosity, etc. However, one must keep in mind that the real reason behind traveling is about exploring and let ourselves be free.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 77, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'lain'.
Suggestion: lain
...ors to decide for traveling. These have lied in budgets, interests, enthusiasms, cur...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, lastly, look, second, secondly, so, thus, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in other words, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2515.0 1977.66487455 127% => OK
No of words: 481.0 407.700716846 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22869022869 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68313059816 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90328155519 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 268.0 212.727598566 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557172557173 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 767.7 618.680645161 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.0585112355 48.9658058833 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.8214285714 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1785714286 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57142857143 5.45110844103 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263175281318 0.236089414692 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0606827451277 0.076458572812 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0564598344007 0.0737576698707 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139285045676 0.150856017488 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0564325661952 0.0645574589148 87% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 10.9000537634 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 135.0 86.8835125448 155% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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