The official authorities should provide access of early education at free of cost to the children’s guardian. At preschool, children build foundation in social, pre-academic and general life skill that will help them for their further study. I agree that provision of free early education should be implemented in every place in order to stressed out from economic crisis, encourage both children and their parents and to eradicate social problems.
To begin with, people are suffering from economic crisis due to sudden pandemic and inflation. Prices in every sector is heavily increasing in a vast ratio. Most people nowadays have difficulty even in fulfilling their basic needs. In this condition, where every things are expensive, people surely find hard to pay fees for early education of their children. For an instance, during COVID pandemic many people had to quit their job which really affected the economy of numerous people. In such circumstances, people really struggle to afford education of their children. As a result, many children weren’t able to acquire the early education. If it was provided without charges, those children could have gain pre-academic knowledge. It would provide relief for parents and encourage children to learn.
Furthermore, it helps in eradication of many problem in our society. When all children are provided gratis pre education, they will all join there to learn. It will likely aware them to avoid in involve in bad activities. However, if there is a mandatory to pay for it, all of them may not be able to receive it. It will really create a huge impact in a community. Drawing from my own experience, I have seen small kids in my community who don’t have attain the preschool. Their mindsets are really different than others. I can say due to brotherhood with bad people, they start to smoke, bully and even steal others valuable items. Such kids will become threat in society if they are not assisted in a right direction. Education is the most important factor that can help them to walk in a right path. It’s certainly clear to see why children should be given complimentary education in order to solve such problems.
To conclude, it can be inferred that pre education should be supplied without any charge by the concerned officials.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 41, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun problem seems to be countable; consider using: 'many problems'.
Suggestion: many problems
...Furthermore, it helps in eradication of many problem in our society. When all children are p...
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Line 3, column 451, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'attained'.
Suggestion: attained
...all kids in my community who don’t have attain the preschool. Their mindsets are reall...
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Line 3, column 509, Rule ID: RATHER_THEN[2]
Message: Did you mean 'different 'from''? 'Different than' is often considered colloquial style.
Suggestion: from
...ol. Their mindsets are really different than others. I can say due to brotherhood wi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, may, really, so, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.4613686534 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 5.04856512141 297% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 12.0772626932 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 22.412803532 156% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 30.3222958057 191% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 5.01324503311 319% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1923.0 1373.03311258 140% => OK
No of words: 380.0 270.72406181 140% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06052631579 5.08290768461 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.04702891845 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70691507009 2.5805825403 105% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 145.348785872 146% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557894736842 0.540411800872 103% => OK
syllable_count: 597.6 419.366225166 143% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 3.25607064018 399% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 8.23620309051 12% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.25165562914 320% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 2.5761589404 233% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 13.0662251656 184% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 21.2450331126 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.0703952451 49.2860985944 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.125 110.228320801 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8333333333 21.698381199 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.875 7.06452816374 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 4.33554083885 208% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 4.45695364238 224% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249109203124 0.272083759551 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0672792791567 0.0996497079465 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0695233041463 0.0662205650399 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151454812777 0.162205337803 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0895425587611 0.0443174109184 202% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.3589403974 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 53.8541721854 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.0289183223 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 12.2367328918 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.42419426049 97% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 63.6247240618 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.7273730684 84% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.498013245 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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