Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
People benefit more from traveling in their own country than from traveling to foreign countries.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
By traveling, people not only can acquire a great deal of experience but also can spend joyful moments. While some people enjoy domestic travelling, some would like to travel abroad. As far as I am concerned, travelling abroad is more beneficial to people than domestic travelling because of several reasons, three of which are learning another language, being familiar with other cultures, and gaining various, cheerful experiences being of great importance.
To begin with, today, it is a great advantage to learn another language. People travelling frequently abroad are more likely to learn the host country’s language because they have to communicate with foreign people. In contrast, people who travel only through their own country usually do not have the opportunity to speak another language. Rather, they remain monolingual, being beneficial neither to their knowledge nor to their future. Although people travelling across their home countries can save much more money, they can take more other valuable advantages from learning a foreign language that arises from travelling abroad. For example, my friend wanted to travel abroad last year, and she had to learn English to speak with foreign people. She hired a private English tutor, and, now, she is able to speak English well. Also, when she returned, she gained the opportunity to work in a large international company needing a person with the ability to speak English thanks to travelling abroad.
Secondly, owing to travelling abroad, people can be familiar with foreign countries’ cultures as a result of both making friends with foreign people and visiting quite a few museums and other spectacular places, as well. With this in mind, they can learn from their cultures and their people, which leads to broadening their horizons and changing their attitudes positively toward other cultures. For instance, my brother did not have a positive attitude to foreign customs or rituals, yet, with travelling to Paris, he was interested in its exciting places and making friends with its inhabitants so much so that he has several French friends with whom he is in contact.
Last but not least, people can gain many various as well as exciting experiences due to travelling abroad. For example, there are a lot of exotic foods people can taste, which are different from their own countries. Additionally, there are a great number of tourist attractions and beautiful scenes people can enjoy when they travel abroad, making different, joyful experiences.
To sum up, when it comes to travel, I would prefer to travel abroad because of experiencing many cheerful, various things which cannot gain from domestic travelling. I hope that the cost of living in my country will be so low that our people can experience travelling abroad and benefit from its great = significant advantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in contrast, as a result, as well as, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2422.0 1977.66487455 122% => OK
No of words: 457.0 407.700716846 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29978118162 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62358717085 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72178978313 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.494529540481 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 725.4 618.680645161 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.5007856276 48.9658058833 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.473684211 100.406767564 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0526315789 20.6045352989 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.31578947368 5.45110844103 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307059433922 0.236089414692 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112055895339 0.076458572812 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0668352869306 0.0737576698707 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190483644445 0.150856017488 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0385984689633 0.0645574589148 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 11.7677419355 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 58.1214874552 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 10.9000537634 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 86.8835125448 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.