Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People can take care of their family members better when they live in big city than in countryside.
As people stride into new century, the large ripples of migrating and living into big city have surged along the shore of almost every country. Surely, big city bears tremendous amount of merits: better medical equipment and construction, high level of education, huge and flourished transit center and market and so on so forth. However, as old Chinese proverb goes that sharp swords have two edges, living in big city hides true disadvantage, one of which is rarely taking care of family. And rural areas tell series of tale about better family.
Firstly, given the fact that many people are involved with so much stuff in big city, they have little time available for whole family. Driving for several minutes to company; accompanying with clients and agents in eating and drinking; struggling continuously in working fields; all of these that occupy most part of people's time are unavoidable in daily life. As a result, more time stretches in work and numerous aspects other than taking care of their children. Thus, the children are often found to be left alone in dark home, without any rounded solicitude. And if a boy is sitting in cold floor, and with thin clothes and uncovered button, he gets more possibility of having a fever, getting headache and suffering from pain. But compared to parents living in big city, parents in rural area spend little time going outside for work, which only consists of farming and waving that are not far away from home. Consequently, they can cook delicious meal to make children healthy, and guard better.
In addition, rural community exits in such way that whole family members live next to each other in big yard and perform respective role for better care of family. Men take advantage of strength and energy, moving heavy pocket of rice above the first floor; women are indulged into deriving water from river nearby, cooking dinners and tending children, and straightening entwined web of other housework. There is No doubt that family becomes better within such environment that tasks are well distributed and completely executed. On the other hand, in big city, because of convenient transportation and large density of population, the area for living is rigid, forcing family member to be parted from whole picture. Accordingly, without help from uncles or aunts, some family problem cannot be solved.
However, as I said in opening paragraph, city enjoys its own merits. So delectable and various are the food in big city. People living in big city can take whole family to taste Italy pizza, Beijing ducks, Korean barbecue, American beef and other perfect and mouth-catching food. With better food, children can grow better with distinct nutrition, and the old can stretch living time with careful and reasonable eating diet. Furthermore, the high level of medical construction can help people cure rare disease and alleviate wide pain.
Considering two main benefits family have in rural region, people can take better care of family there.
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- People who cannot accept the criticism from others will not be successful at working in a group 60
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 750, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'parent'.
Suggestion: parent
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, so, thus, well, in addition, no doubt, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 29.0 13.8261648746 210% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 43.0788530466 32% => OK
Preposition: 69.0 52.1666666667 132% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2516.0 1977.66487455 127% => OK
No of words: 495.0 407.700716846 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08282828283 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71684168287 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47563373123 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 291.0 212.727598566 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587878787879 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 793.8 618.680645161 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.6819812472 48.9658058833 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.363636364 100.406767564 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 5.45110844103 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.324648392225 0.236089414692 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0898964566062 0.076458572812 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0645764765279 0.0737576698707 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194646043958 0.150856017488 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0480965119805 0.0645574589148 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 124.0 86.8835125448 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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