Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People should sometimes do things that they do not enjoy doing. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Everyone has their own preferred way of life, all of them has their own strengths and weaknesses. I agree that People should sometimes do things that they do not enjoy doing. I feel this way for the two main reasons I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, doing things we don’t enjoy doing sharpen our personality and increase our skills which are two things most people would like to have. It’s difficult to sharpen our personalities and experience without doing thing we don’t enjoy like hard work. My experience a is good example of this. When I was young, I had no money to enter university, I worked hard in café in our neighborhood for 2 years. After that I had enough money to register in the university and now I’m at my fifth year studying electrical engineering. Hard work learned me and give me strength throughout my life events.
Furthermore, many people get bored and leave their jobs because they don’t feel joy. On the other hand, minority of people struggle and hold patience in order to pass boring time. One of many examples of this is the Chinese business Jack Ma the founder of Alibaba business. He struggled in finding any job in the first place. After that he decided to start his own company. However, he failed in the first five years but nowadays he is the richest chines person in the world. Jack ma declared he learned a lot of skills throughout his career I believe patience was the key to success for Jack Ma.
In conclusion I strongly agree with the statement if one seeks success and glory. This is because doing we don’t enjoy rather than It give us skills, it is in most of the cases the black box of our success in all aspects of life
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... in finding any job in the first place. After that he decided to start his own compan...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'chines'' or 'chine's'?
Suggestion: chines'; chine's
...ve years but nowadays he is the richest chines person in the world. Jack ma declared h...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ox of our success in all aspects of life
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'furthermore', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'i feel', 'in conclusion', 'to begin with', 'in the first place', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.230337078652 0.229887763892 100% => OK
Verbs: 0.179775280899 0.158761421928 113% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0702247191011 0.0866891130778 81% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0196629213483 0.046263068375 43% => Some adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.115168539326 0.0685040099705 168% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.123595505618 0.118717715034 104% => OK
Participles: 0.0224719101124 0.0351676179071 64% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.53110601945 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0224719101124 0.0309702414327 73% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0702247191011 0.0887237588012 79% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00842696629213 0.0209618222197 40% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00561797752809 0.0139019557991 40% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1722.0 2387.08602151 72% => OK
No of words: 307.0 408.028673835 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.60912052117 5.86048508987 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.48200974243 93% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.299674267101 0.338922669872 88% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.218241042345 0.251872472559 87% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.14332247557 0.174417080927 82% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0879478827362 0.112833075102 78% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53110601945 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563517915309 0.524397521467 107% => OK
Word variations: 59.9993512333 59.2087087015 101% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6684587814 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0555555556 20.5533526081 83% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.1165412556 48.84282405 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.6666666667 120.699889404 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0555555556 20.5533526081 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.611111111111 0.644075263715 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.54480286738 72% => OK
Readability: 38.8796597901 45.7405998639 85% => OK
Elegance: 1.19642857143 1.45489161554 82% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245515369325 0.300154397459 82% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0901178235408 0.103427244359 87% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0939441080697 0.0752933317313 125% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.454853234081 0.497263757937 91% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.150661611643 0.151897553556 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0918338093657 0.114077575197 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.125651775474 0.0781384742642 161% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.230304163766 0.336927656856 68% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0927671793028 0.067059652881 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170406874686 0.210909579961 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0930933323639 0.0618886996521 150% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8870967742 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.86379928315 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.91756272401 81% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 8.42114695341 107% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 13.6433691756 110% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.