Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People should sometimes do things that they do not enjoy doing. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Some activities are not pleasant for everyone, but many times it is a requirement to perform them well due to several reasons. Consequently, I strongly agree with the idea that we have to do things that are not so enjoyable for us.
First and foremost, people have obligations and responsibilities that must be done in order to earn money and sustain their lives. The main compelling example is one’s work. Of course, it is undeniable that many people enjoy their jobs. However, there is also a significant amount of the population that perform their daily activities as an obligation to earn their bread despite the uncomfortable context in which they work. For example, a retired elder man who can't afford to pay his bills, medicines, and health treatments, needs to do something in order to purchase all the products he needs. So he decides to continue working as a seller even though he does not want to work because of his health problems.
Second, many of the activities that are not enjoyable are good deeds. If you ask a kid whether he prefers to play or to study, he would most likely answer: Play! That is normal because playing is a pleasant activity which does not demand effort and implies fun. On the other hand, studying demands concentration and effort, and besides, for many children it is boring. For instance, when my aunt asks me to teach math to my little cousin, he always refuses it and it is very difficult to convince him to study. Nevertheless, when we study math and the next week he has an exam, he performs very well, and we all are satisfied with the work.
In summary, I believe that doing things that are considered boring is important in our society, not because they are boring, but due to their implications.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 469, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...k. For example, a retired elder man who cant afford to pay his bills, medicines, and...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, first, however, if, nevertheless, second, so, well, for example, for instance, in summary, of course, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 52.1666666667 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1453.0 1977.66487455 73% => OK
No of words: 307.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7328990228 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70117627654 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583061889251 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 618.680645161 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.7925704023 48.9658058833 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.785714286 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9285714286 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9285714286 5.45110844103 200% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131688331661 0.236089414692 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0495839802664 0.076458572812 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0624510291666 0.0737576698707 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0992072283873 0.150856017488 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0465516463631 0.0645574589148 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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