Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People should buy things made in their own country, even if they are more expensive than things made in other Countries.
Recently,our life has becoming a market.every country has close cooperation with other countries.Some people think they should buy things in their own country even though they are more expensive than other countries,However other people say they should not buy own county thinks because they are more expensive.In my opinion, i agree that we should buy other countries things because this are not expensive.
First,Buying only local products is a kind of action against market rules, and buying other countries things can save a lot of money.Also buying from other countries will also improve the world’s economic.For example,In china, people buy good from other countries, these goods are not available in their country, thus people consumption and their economic growth which also provides a lot of employment opportunities for people.So we should obey the market rules and buy foreign things we need as well.
Second,Many countries have some ares that are not as good as other countries, then they need to introduce advanced technologies from other countries, thus this will allow us to learn advanced technology and promote cooperation between two countries, this cooperation also could enhance competitiveness.For example,My friends company, last year his company introduced the advanced equipment,this equipment combined with his company work ability then hav3e a great competitiveness in the market, as a result more companies wants to cooperation with his company.
Finally, even though our country things are expensive,this can makes our country’s goods sell more and promote economic development, market prosperity. But we should not forget that we buying other countries things can promote world economic development and provide more job opportunities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, second, so, then, thus, well, for example, kind of, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 52.1666666667 36% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1521.0 1977.66487455 77% => OK
No of words: 266.0 407.700716846 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.71804511278 4.8611393121 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.48103885553 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18470759806 2.67179642975 119% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 212.727598566 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548872180451 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 618.680645161 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.6003584229 24% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 53.0 20.1344086022 263% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 175.793515239 48.9658058833 359% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 304.2 100.406767564 303% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 53.2 20.6045352989 258% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 23.6 5.45110844103 433% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.5376344086 361% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.332975661144 0.236089414692 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.18993225786 0.076458572812 248% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.123868784741 0.0737576698707 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214604730008 0.150856017488 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.126085721495 0.0645574589148 195% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 32.1 11.7677419355 273% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 9.22 58.1214874552 16% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 6.10430107527 260% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.1 10.1575268817 247% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.78 10.9000537634 154% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.89 8.01818996416 123% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 86.8835125448 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 10.002688172 280% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 23.2 10.0537634409 231% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 28.0 10.247311828 273% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
More content wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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