Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? “People should keep trying to reach their goals, even if they seem impossible to achieve.” Use specific reasons and examples to explain your position.
It is undeniable that education plays an imperative role in building a successful career of an individual. When it comes to the issue that whether people should keep trying to achieve desired goals or not, different people have different opinions. In my viewpoint, although the achievement of impossible goals seems to be an arduous piece of work, but one should never quit. There are a plethora of reasons which I will elucidate in the following paragraphs.
First and foremost, learning is the key that everyone wants to improve. while chasing the desired goal, not only the communicative skills but also the creative thinking capacity of an individual will improve. To illustrate, if a student is preparing for a UPSC exam, which is considered as the most difficult in India. After three failed attempts, rather than to quit he decided to prepare again. Moreover, Failure means that an individual needs to put an extra efforts to culminate.
Furthermore, there are two types of goals, one is short-term and another is Long-term. Short-term goals are achievable but long-term goals require a lot of courage, determination, and time. Once the goal is achieved, the feeling of success is unexplainable, it will not enhances the individual’s personality but also affects the living lifestyle of a person. Moreover, Hard work is the key to success, one should never deny that fact.
Last but not the least, to perform better people have to learn new skills and technology to remain stuck to their goals. These technology and skills come in handy even if an individual is unable to reach the desired goal. Despite of the fact that it may take numerous unsuccessful attempts, but the end result could be very profitable and fruitful. Additionally, failure not only make an individual stronger but also help them to analyze their potential
In conclusion, one failure means one way to become unsuccessful, and there are thousands of ways out, which have to unearth.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, while, in conclusion, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 43.0788530466 39% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1645.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 324.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07716049383 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89758602997 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574074074074 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.9374442853 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.7647058824 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0588235294 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.05882352941 5.45110844103 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142363003567 0.236089414692 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0435408885765 0.076458572812 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0538026458781 0.0737576698707 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0722357202574 0.150856017488 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0734031585889 0.0645574589148 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.