I think it is important to discuss this topic because it takes up a lot of room in our lives.
Some people agree that most individuals spend their time in enjoyment activities while others oppose this claim.
In my point of view, I would disagree with the above-mentioned statement that people use up too much of their time for personal enjoyment.
I feel this way for several causes, which I will explore in greater detail in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, people today spend more time working than ever before, which means that they are spending a lot of time fulfilling serious obligations.
For example, in our busy lives, most of the employees who work in large companies have to work for long hours and meet the tough deadlines
Therefore, I do not think that there is enough time to spend in joyful activities that can give positive feelings and eliminate stress from employee's working lives.
Secondly, no one can deny that money plays a paramount role in our lives because it considers as the only way to offer food, decent housing, and good schools for children.
In other words, money helps us to meet our basic needs and open up the opportunities to do things that we like to do hence most people are keen to work more to gain more money that serves other things.
Drawing from my own experience, I work full-time as a civil engineer in a big company and usually, I work extra hours in order to obtain more money to go on vacation in summer to a certain country such as Italy or France. This is certainly enjoyable for me.
From what I have deliberated above, I reckon that nowadays people do not waste their time in activities they like to do but they are managing their time with a well-balanced plan.
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Children today would be happier withfewer possessions 73
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement As long as they meet deadlines and attend meetings company employees should be allowed to work any hours they choose Use specific reasons and examples to support your answers 80
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement People today spend too much time on personal enjoyment doing things they like to do rather than doing things they should do Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 78
- Do you agree or disagree Although technology had made communication easier there are still as many misunderstandings among people as there were in the past 73
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement People who have had difficulty learning a skill go on to become better teachers of that skill than people who learned it easily Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 80
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 24, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the individuals') or simply say ''most individuals''.
Suggestion: most of the individuals; most individuals
...m in our lives. Some people agree that most of individuals spend their time in enjoyment activitie...
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Line 6, column 33, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the employees') or simply say ''most employees''.
Suggestion: most of the employees; most employees
...gation For example, in our busy lives, most of employees who work in large companies have to wor...
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Line 8, column 84, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'considers'?
Suggestion: considers
... paramount role in our lives because it consider as the only way to offer food, decent h...
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Line 11, column 134, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'managed'.
Suggestion: managed
...activities they like to do but they are manage their time with a well-balanced plan.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, for example, i feel, i reckon, i think, such as, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1417.0 1977.66487455 72% => OK
No of words: 308.0 407.700716846 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60064935065 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50234120431 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561688311688 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 618.680645161 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.6003584229 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.1344086022 149% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 106.784877206 48.9658058833 218% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 141.7 100.406767564 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.8 20.6045352989 149% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.6 5.45110844103 249% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 11.0 4.53405017921 243% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268331599759 0.236089414692 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0951981326942 0.076458572812 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0988902445018 0.0737576698707 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0973830139408 0.150856017488 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0971162139551 0.0645574589148 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 11.7677419355 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.1575268817 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.99 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.0537634409 139% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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