It is well-known that with the rapid of technology communication became easer by using several tools such as internet, computers social media platforms and so on.
Some people argue the idea that today's society is able to know all about global news, while others oppose this claim.
In my point of view, I would agree with the above-mentioned statement that the majority of people are aware of international news.
I feel this way for several causes, which I will explore in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, People in the past lived in isolated societies due to the lack of technological tools such as computers and mobile phones as well as the sources of news were limited by television, radio, and newspaper where they provided local news and rarely international news.
In contrast, nowadays people have access to plenty of social networks such as Facebook, Twitter, and Google. Each one of them assists people to be aware of news in any spot of the world.
As, the Internet allowed for unlimited access to news, and people became more inclined to read news about other countries.
To continue, no one can deny that the borders between countries are blurring by the day, and we are moving towards globalization.
In other words, Globalization has caused an increase in the number of multinational companies, government collaboration, lower international transportation costs, and the flexibility of studying abroad.
As a result, everyone now needs to be aware of what is going on in the world.
For example, when a foreign student decides to continue his/her studies or work in a country, he/she must be aware of the country's news.
If he was not aware, he/she could back out of this step, which could be an excellent start for his/her life.
From what I have deliberated, I reckon that individuals are much more informed about worldwide news because of the openness of the world on the internet and social media platforms which caused to narrow the gap between countries, not only that but also globalization has played a paramount role in our modern lives which helped to make the world a smaller place.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 33, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'todays'' or 'today's'?
Suggestion: todays'; today's
...so on. Some people argue the idea that todays society is able to know all about globa...
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Line 14, column 85, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... globalization provided the motivation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, well, while, for example, i feel, i reckon, in contrast, such as, as a result, as well as, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1698.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 335.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06865671642 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90697841442 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588059701493 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 533.7 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.8686374947 48.9658058833 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.2 100.406767564 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 20.6045352989 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.53333333333 5.45110844103 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 14.0 4.53405017921 309% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194030040799 0.236089414692 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.059323415699 0.076458572812 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0640672397849 0.0737576698707 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0614070696994 0.150856017488 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0658228744763 0.0645574589148 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.01818996416 115% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 86.8835125448 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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