Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
People today spend too much time on personal enjoyment-doing things they like to do-rather than doing things they should do.
I totally disagree with the statement which says people today spend too much time on personal enjoyment rather than doing things they should do.
Personal enjoyment is essential part to stay healthy and productive in one’s life. However, people in today’s world couldn't give proper time to their personal interests due to certain factors such as academics, employment, investment. In other words to be successful in life.
Firstly, in today’s world people believe in the performance. For getting employment and good salary person has to work and prove himself. If you are born intelligent than all things are easy but for an average person things are different. For example, I currently work two shifts a day in order to pay my tuition fees of the graduate school. I have to work on my assignments along with managing a full-time job. I couldn't think about getting in to fitness center as at this stage I cannot afford it.There are so many people like me who cannot fulfil their personal desire in order to pursue the goal of the life.It seems like a common man is always struggling and racing in this world full of competition.
Secondly, children have to face enormous competition in school in their academics, sports as well as other co-curricular activities. Things were not the same few years back when I was a child. I still remember life without technology was more beautiful than recent case scenario. When I was a child for me window is the only thing which was in my bedroom and from where I used to sneak out without my parents notice just to play hide-and-seek with my friends. But now Children get a bunch of assignment during their vacation from the teachers, which stop them doing what they want.
Middle class person suffers financially to keep up with the needs of family. Parents are not able to give their children extra time which they should be due to work for their mortgage and meet other financial demands. For example, average school cost fifty thousand every year, which is too much. A normal human in today’s world is not taking proper sleep due to work-related stress. As a result frequency of getting ill increased enormously compared to a few years back. For example, researchers have found out a normal person spend half of the payment in health related issues during their lifetime.
To wrap up,life of an average person become a trap from the beginning where he/she has to prove oneself all the time. Due to above mentioned issues in today’s world people couldn't give time to things of personal enjoyment.
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Discourse Markers used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.247967479675 0.229887763892 108% => OK
Verbs: 0.156504065041 0.158761421928 99% => OK
Adjectives: 0.109756097561 0.0866891130778 127% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0548780487805 0.046263068375 119% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0609756097561 0.0685040099705 89% => OK
Prepositions: 0.117886178862 0.118717715034 99% => OK
Participles: 0.0264227642276 0.0351676179071 75% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.55955056864 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0426829268293 0.0309702414327 138% => OK
Particles: 0.00813008130081 0.00188951952338 430% => Too many particles.
Determiners: 0.0589430894309 0.0887237588012 66% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00813008130081 0.0209618222197 39% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0223577235772 0.0139019557991 161% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2602.0 2387.08602151 109% => OK
No of words: 442.0 408.028673835 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.88687782805 5.86048508987 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58517132086 4.48200974243 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.341628959276 0.338922669872 101% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.226244343891 0.251872472559 90% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.160633484163 0.174417080927 92% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.101809954751 0.112833075102 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55955056864 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531674208145 0.524397521467 101% => OK
Word variations: 61.7301392116 59.2087087015 104% => OK
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6684587814 111% => OK
Sentence length: 19.2173913043 20.5533526081 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.4782428587 48.84282405 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.130434783 120.699889404 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2173913043 20.5533526081 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.695652173913 0.644075263715 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.5376344086 132% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.54480286738 180% => Correct essay format wanted
Readability: 41.8418256935 45.7405998639 91% => OK
Elegance: 1.44029850746 1.45489161554 99% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277787863124 0.300154397459 93% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0693976700361 0.103427244359 67% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0450809385464 0.0752933317313 60% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.479295309745 0.497263757937 96% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.184318556961 0.151897553556 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0935767270182 0.114077575197 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.135495521372 0.0781384742642 173% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.249707287243 0.336927656856 74% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0873715498069 0.067059652881 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.221805223547 0.210909579961 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.216386872003 0.0618886996521 350% => Less connections among paragraphs
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8870967742 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.86379928315 155% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.91756272401 122% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 8.42114695341 119% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.4623655914 162% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.75985663082 145% => OK
Total topic words: 18.0 13.6433691756 132% => OK
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Rates: 85 out of 100
Scores by essay E-rater: 25 Out of 30