Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? A person should never make an important decision alone. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
I think making an important decision should not be done individually. The reasons to support my viewpoint are elaborated on in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, making an important decision individually will lead to stress and tension. To be more specific, every person has some special and significant moments in his or her life. In this regard, it is very vital for people to make a accurate decision in order to improve the quality of their life or not be bothered in the future. It is no secret to anyone that when people make a decision by themselves they have been engaged in challenging situations to choose a best way. In fact, they endure a great amount of stress and pressure until they see their decisions consequences. On the other hand, should one use others experiences and knowledge in order to make a decision, they are able to reduce their stress their decisions' accuracy is higher than when they make a same decision alone.
Moreover, a person should never make an important decision alone since he or she cannot examine all the aspects of his or her decision. To put it other words, some people have not enough knowledge and information in certain areas. In this case, if people make decisions by their own, their decision may lead to unpleasant and unfavorable results. On the contrary, consulting a knowledgeable and experienced person, individuals will make a more accurate decision and will prevent unpleasant consequences. An example can shed some light on this issue. Nowadays, stock market is more amazing for juvenile since they think it is easy to increase their money in this market. In this case, consider a person who wants to increase his or her investment by buying stock. If he or she has not enough information in this area, his or her decision may lead to catastrophic disaster, and he or she may lose all his investment by choosing a wrong stock.
In conclusion, contemplating all the mentioned reasons and examples, I do believe that people never make a critical decision alone since a wrong decision will adversely affect his or her life.
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- TOEFL T P O 20 - Integrated Writing Task 3
- TOEFL TPO 37 integrated writing question 3
- Extra 1 - Integrated writing 3
- TPO 24- Integrated 76
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? To improve the quality of education, universities should spend money on salaries university professors. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 65
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, moreover, so, i think, in conclusion, in fact, on the contrary, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1738.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 357.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86834733894 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79116719043 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.473389355742 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 561.6 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.7817013174 48.9658058833 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.235294118 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.17647058824 5.45110844103 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246530731915 0.236089414692 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0905849995824 0.076458572812 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0713621363201 0.0737576698707 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182408987211 0.150856017488 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0546663617886 0.0645574589148 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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