Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? A person should never make an important decision alone. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
did you ever used other people advice to turn left or right during car driving? Nowadays, everyone has his/her own thoughts and few other people can make a change on that. however, some believes, we should never make vital decisions alone. personally, I prefer to do not share my issues with others due to their lack of knowledge about my personal life. I feel this way for some reasons which I will mention in the essay below.
First of all, loneliness is an accepted aspect of human life in the modern era, which means, no one could not have a presice consideration about other people dreams, passions, goals, etc. It looks baffling to try to know another person when you can't have a clear image of yourself. In other words, every person most make his/her decisions because nobody has the same sence about a problem, in fact there is not an individual that can have the same conceive of a matter to have effect on your mind. my personal example is a compelling example of this, ten years ago, when I was graduated from high school, my father made an important decision for my life, to study mechanical engineering at the university. Actually, I was trying to be an artist at that time, however he did not know about my favours, hobbies and other elements that characterized me! his advice and thoughts make an unsuitable effect on my life.
Secondly, Sometimes you have enough time to interact with another people and ask them to assist you to make better decision, albeit, most of the time you can't do the same thing. consequently, there is no evidence that proofs an improve in someones thoughts about a problem by sharing ideas to decide on a specific subject in limitation of the time. For instance, four years age, I experienced a bad accident in which I was responsible because I made a wrong decision in less than one second. Shortage in time make the debate more complex, because, when you don't have enough time to speak to any other person about the problem they may help you but in the worst way.
In conclusion, I'm of the opinion that a person should always be aware of making personal decisions without any other person help. this is because of the loneliness and because of the limits in the time that everybody has to share his opinion and make decision upon them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, consequently, first, however, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, as to, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, in fact, first of all, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1883.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 407.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62653562654 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49157444576 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45845902771 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53316953317 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 614.7 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.3772151402 48.9658058833 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.6875 100.406767564 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4375 20.6045352989 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1875 5.45110844103 187% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247518769786 0.236089414692 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0823081497182 0.076458572812 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0514447986823 0.0737576698707 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154391736247 0.150856017488 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.014337225537 0.0645574589148 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 11.7677419355 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.87 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.